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Great job on the wikipedia article. I have a bit of feedback that might help to improve what you have so far. In the first sentence where you establish her notability, I would include something saying “she is best known for…” maybe the Embargo Collective? As well, I would spellcheck “Ryerson” in the first sentence of her biography section. I would also suggest creating a hyperlink for ‘Sundance Film Festival”, as well as the Embargo Collective and her film, Prayer for a Good Day, if possible. For your last sentence under the ‘Biography’ section I would spellcheck ‘art’ to ‘are’ and write it like this: “Most of her films are short films, however” therein placing the comma before the word ‘however’. I would also include, if possible, a section on any awards she has received or been nominated for (i.e. something at Sundance?) and a section summarizing her film, Prayer for a Good Day. Other then that, this is definitely an excellent start and I wish you luck as you complete the final draft! Musiclove44 ( talk) 20:36, 9 October 2015 (UTC)Musiclove44
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Film has premiered at Sundance, she's acted in widely distributed films. Notable. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Seazzy ( talk • contribs) 05:10, 5 March 2017 (UTC)