I am well aware of the good article criteria and what they are not, and I was not planning to fail this article because of this. I am simply making a suggestion since most video game articles have images.
wirenote (
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22:24, 13 June 2014 (UTC)reply
Gameplay: Disambiguation link found, for
pogo. Please fix
Is player-character usually spelled with a hyphen?
Link Twitter.
Development: After you say Tim Rogers, we do not repeat "Tim" again.
Please pay attention to
WP:N'T. "didn't" should be "did not".
Reception: Please include the GameRankings aggregation in the prose as well
As TouchArcade is a web publication, it is not italicized
with arcade mechanics as "sublimely chewable ... bubblegum". I don't understand this.
The first mention of Joseph Leray in the text is just as "Leray" and we only learn his first name a few paragraphs later. Please fix
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Wirenote, about images, see
the talk page—I'm in contact with Rogers about OTRSing game assets and, you know, E3 season, etc. Player-character is used both ways—I prefer the hyphenation as less confusing. GameRankings doesn't need to be mentioned in the prose by any rule I know (and wasn't mentioned in my other GAs/FAs). TouchArcade is italicized per
WP:ITALICS (which says: Online magazines, newspapers, and news sites with original content should generally be italicized)—it has little to do with whether it's a website and more with its function. If it functions like a magazine or newspaper, the work is italicized. I believe I've addressed the rest. Thanks for the review! czar
♔00:52, 9 June 2014 (UTC)reply