Overall, the prose is very well written and easy to read. I've made a few minor grammatical adjustments here and there, so there's nothing major that really needs work.
The image 'File:JCBCP logo.png' needs a fair-use rationale. Its caption is a bit long; see if it can be shortened to be more concise. There are no captions on the two images in the 'behavior' section.
Thanks, WTF. I've left a message for the original image uploader, but they've been idle for most of this month. I'll edit down the caption, but we may need to ditch the image altogether if the uploader can't provide the fair-use rationale. -
UtherSRG(talk)04:16, 29 May 2010 (UTC)reply
Doesn't look like the uploader will respond at this point. Though, now that I think of it, for non-free corporate logos to be used under fair-use, our policy really only allows the fair-use to be used on one article. Usually, that article would be about the corporation or organization itself. So, in this case, I would think the best bet would be to remove the logo from this article, and the article could be promoted. I don't think the logo is really necessary anyway, for an article that's about a particular species.
WTF? (
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19:52, 8 June 2010 (UTC)reply