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"Kanda is devoted to the Black Order and their fight against a group of enemies known as the Noah Family; however, he is cold and antisocial toward his teammates, often choosing to engage in fights with the series' protagonist, Allen Walker." This sentence is overly long in my opinion, perhaps break it into two sentences at the semicolon?
The image in the "appearances" section should be given
alt text.
Can't do it. There are apparently two people with the same name. Kanda's Takuya Sato has an entire different carreer as seen
here
"Kanda refuses to die until he finds a "certain person."" The quotes here should go before the punctuation.
Done
Since Mugen is italicized, shouldn't Innocence be as well?
Done
"Hoping Kanda would die with him, Alma attacked Kanda but he was instead sliced to pieces". By whom? Kanda? If so, this should be made clearer.
Done
The last paragraph of the appearances section is very short. It should either be expanded with more information about the games Kanda appeared in, or merged into somewhere else.
Done, but I'm not so sure about it.
"She paid most attention to his hair and eyes, especially...". The comma here should probably go after "especially".
Done.
"It was originally much different during the series and had too many inconsistencies". Sounds clunky, and "much different" is poor grammar.
Overall, this looks pretty good to me. No disambiguation links and the only copyright violations detected are direct quotes. An excellent article in general, just a few minor prose issues. If you're able to address my concerns, then I'd be more than happy to pass this article. I'll place it on hold for now. Omni Flames (
talk)03:24, 9 July 2016 (UTC)reply
@
Tintor2: About the last paragraph that you merged. Those two don't really go well together. Perhaps a better spot to put it would be in the reception section? Omni Flames (
talk)22:58, 9 July 2016 (UTC)reply
I don't really have an opinion either way where the questipn mark goes, but I certainly believe there's no point in addressing it through a subst. If it's really such an issue, then it should be fixed at the source rather than patching it across the hundreds of articles through that. ~Cheers,
TenTonParasol00:31, 14 May 2017 (UTC)reply
People might be saying to themselves "what do these boxes [][][][] mean, is something else supposed to be there, help me out here Wikipedia, gimme a hint" and notice there are two blue links immediately adjacent to the boxes, and try one or both of those links to see if they throw any light on the issue. They wouldn't immediately jump to the little question mark, especially since it is not actually next to the boxes, it's next to "Kanda Yu" which they can read already without any help.
Siuenti (
씨유엔티)
19:54, 14 May 2017 (UTC)reply
That situation would be true on literally any other page containing Japanese as it would be here. I'm genuinely, genuinely saying that issue would be best solved across ALL articles at one time by altering the template itself rather than a band-aid fix across individual articles, and I'm seriously asking if you wish to more properly address it, it will seriously be better fixed at the source of the problem. ~Cheers,
TenTonParasol19:59, 14 May 2017 (UTC)reply
Oh wait... maybe you don't want the little star, in which case I still feel sorry for the poor schmucks looking at the little boxes.
Siuenti (
씨유엔티)
20:12, 14 May 2017 (UTC)reply
Listen, it's genuinely an issue with the template, not this article itself. If it's an issue, wouldn't it be better to fix it across every article using a Japanese character set via this template at once? That's more sensible than going to every single individual article and substing the template over a simple fix. I opened up a discussion about it at the nihongo template. Because that's the better place to fix it. ~Cheers,
TenTonParasol20:15, 14 May 2017 (UTC)reply
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