Is "This article is about the canceled online video game. For the 2017 interactive fiction video games, see World of Darkness Preludes: Vampire and Mage" is really needed ? at the top of the page ? I'm not so sure. --
Archimëa (
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13:14, 17 November 2019 (UTC)reply
I think it's fine.
Layed -> Laid
Make sure to keep the tense consistent; for instance, in the same sentence it's said that IGN had both called it something and was calling it something.
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Abryn: Wow, I didn't realize it would go through the review process this quickly. I see you already passed it, but I would still like to fix the problems with tense... but I can't find where the problem is, would you mind pointing it out (or if it's a small edit, maybe it's easier if you do it directly)? --
Alexandra IDVtalk16:41, 17 November 2019 (UTC)reply