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Article milestones
DateProcessResult
July 3, 2020 Good article nomineeListed
November 24, 2022 Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Water (Kanye West song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: LOVI33 ( talk · contribs) 03:29, 3 July 2020 (UTC) reply

Hey Kyle Peake, I will start my review now. LOVI 33 03:29, 3 July 2020 (UTC) reply

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lead

 Done for the above even though I had already set these credits properly before this edit switched things around -- Kyle Peake ( talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC) reply
  • "Clemons and West had a conversation about Jesus, which the song came from" → "The song came from a conversation between Clemons and West about Jesus"
 Done -- Kyle Peake ( talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC) reply

Background and recording

  • First paragraph is really long, maybe split it up into a few?
 Done how's that look? -- Kyle Peake ( talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC) reply
 Done -- Kyle Peake ( talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC) reply

Composition and lyrics

  • Looks Good!

Release and promotion

  • No problems found, looks good!

Critical reception

  • Looks good!

Commercial performance

  • "entered at number 51 on the US Billboard Hot 100" → "entered the US Billboard Hot 100 at number 51"
  • "the track gave Clemons his first appearance on the Hot 100" → "the track gave Clemons his first appearance on the chart"
 Done -- Kyle Peake ( talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC) reply

Credits and personnel

  • Change title to just "Personnel," "Credits and personnel" is used when there are recording locations involved
Are you sure about this? I was thinking that stuff like "recording engineer", "associated performer" and "mastering engineer" makes it titled as of current? -- Kyle Peake ( talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC) reply
Okay fair enough, Keep it as is. LOVI 33 13:37, 3 July 2020 (UTC) reply

Charts

  • Looks good!

Notes

  • Looks good!

References

  • ref 1 is a bare url, replace with a citation
 Not done I instead removed since it was added in the recent edit that changed the infobox -- Kyle Peake ( talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC) reply

External links

  • Looks good!

Final comments and verdict