"Springfield is without a casino when Mr. Burns' Casino is demolished. However, a confusion over whether demolitions are supposed to involve implosions or explosions results in the casino being blasted into a huge dust cloud. " This may be out of order. When was the casino demolished? Your wording implies it is destroyed two times.
Wikilink hitchhiking
How do David M. Stern and Neil Affleck relate to the show (producers? etc)
"The morning after having drinking extensively," Fix
"wether " -> whether
'since it would "raise some question."' Raise some question, or questions?
"On August 7, 2007, the episode was released as part of The Simpsons: The Complete Tenth Season DVD set." Needs ref
This is not a reliable ref. I'm sure you can find something better, considering the popular topic.
Also, make sure direct quotes have refs directly after the sentence (even if the same citation covers the following sentence). I've found a bunch of examples in the article. Other than that and the comments above, the article looks really good. Awesome job researching it! I'll place it on hold for seven days to be fixed. Thanks,
Ruby2010comment!00:13, 13 May 2011 (UTC)reply