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Limelightangel ( talk) 08:57, 22 October 2020 (UTC)
The content needs citations for all the content, so that it is clear where the information comes from. All editors need to add these at the same time as the relevant content. Use the Cite drop-down in the edit page, select the correct media format for your source, and complete as much of the template as possible. It was covered in the online training, and there is plenty of online help. Learn the differences between blue in text citations to other wiki pages, numbered references, and External Links. Use the Cite template for websites, and include the page title, website name, author, publisher, data and data accessed. Look at some existing pages, and read the help resources on external links (Google 'Wikipedia external links'): /info/en/?search=Wikipedia:External_links.
Some other essential starting points are:
Limelightangel ( talk) 10:13, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
- learn how to make multiple numbered text references to the same source, with the latter listed only once at the end. See Wikipedia:Citing_sources#Citing_multiple_pages_of_the_same_source and Help:Footnotes#WP:NAMEDREFS. This applies to 11 of the current 12 references. - try to balance the foreign language references with some acceptable English sources - always reference as you add content. The introductory and History sections have no references.
Limelightangel ( talk) 13:00, 2 November 2020 (UTC)
- fix the two errors in red in the references. - learn how to make multiple numbered text references to the same source, with the latter listed only once at the end. See Wikipedia:Citing_sources#Citing_multiple_pages_of_the_same_source and Help:Footnotes#WP:NAMEDREFS. This applies to 11 of the current 12 references. - try to balance the foreign language references with some acceptable English sources - always reference as you add content. The History section has no references.
Limelightangel ( talk) 10:41, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
There is a wide range of potentially relevant factual content for this topic. Some indicative examples, which will all need acceptable references: early names for the site included 'Pistoia Sanotorium', and 'Nursing Sbertoli for Nervous Diseases'; the site was originally a residential mansion for a nobleman, containing ballrooms, tennis courts, a gymnasium, etc. This is evidenced by the Google Scholar article by Andrea Pacini, 2015 Inventing the Self: the case of NOF4 in Volterra Sanatorium; the asylum was one of the most famous in Italy (use in the opening summary, with a reference); the asylum was noted for it's use of a range of treatments, including the use of ECT, straitjackets, the use of malaria-infested mosquitoes, etc.; the buildings were occupied by the Nazis in WW2, and used as a prison for political prisoners; Silvano Fedi attacked the prison and released 54 prisoners; prior to the national legislation closing asylums, the institute was inspected and widely criticized for the standards of care evidenced. There are 22 articles on Scholar mentioning Ville Sbertoli, including references to it's origins, history, treatments and artwork. The book by Andrea Ottarelli has not been mentioned. These examples also provide opportunities to create relevant links out to many other pages. Limelightangel ( talk) 11:02, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
@ Userwikipediia, LiucEs31, Lu7Liuc, and Galiucc7:; Team , we need to add references in the history section and check references in the architecture section. Alagna2000 ( talk) 10:25, 10 November 2020 (UTC)
@ Userwikipediia, LiucEs31, Alagna2000, and Galiucc7:; okay, me and @ Alagna2000: will take care of the references in the history section. Lu7Liuc ( talk) 11:01, 10 November 2020 (UTC)
@ Userwikipediia, Lu7Liuc, Galiucc7, and Alagna2000:›; okay, I will take care of fixing the introduction, and the structure of the page; I will also try to add some more information in the infobox. LiucEs31 LiucEs31 ( talk) 19:56, 11 November 2020 (UTC)
@ Userwikipediia, Lu7Liuc, Galiucc7, and Alagna2000:; Hi guys, I changed and modified the introduction a little bit, what do you think? LiucEs31 LiucEs31 ( talk) 19:56, 11 November 2020 (UTC)
@ LiucEs31: I like it, it's very synthetic and easy to understand. However i would suggest to change the verb in the last sencence: instead of saying "has more than 25 buildings" we can say "counts more than 25 buildings". Let me know what you think! Galiucc7 ( talk)
@ Galiucc7: Yes I agree with you, I changed it! LiucEs31 LiucEs31 ( talk) 19:56, 11 November 2020 (UTC)
@ Userwikipediia, Galiucc7, LiucEs31, and Alagna2000: I finally added references to the history section Lu7Liuc ( talk)
@ Userwikipediia, Lu7Liuc, LiucEs31, and Alagna2000: team, I found some images about Villa Sbertoli's architecture today but since they have copyright I asked the owner if we can use them so we can fix the images problem.
Guys, we have the permission of the owners to use their photos. I'll upload a few now, let me know what you think Galiucc7 ( talk)
I added one image on the architecture, what do you think? Galiucc7 ( talk)
@ Galiucc7: I think the pictures are good but for me there are too many in the architecture part. In my opinion we should distribute them more equally and maybe positioning them not only on the right side. LiucEs31 LiucEs31 ( talk) 19:56, 11 November 2020 (UTC)
@ LiucEs31: Okay great, I'll make sure to solve the problem tonight. Galiucc7 ( talk)
@ Userwikipediia, Lu7Liuc, LiucEs31, and Alagna2000: guys, I was thinking that the first image on the introduction is a front view of Villa Rosati not of all the buildings in general. Should we try to find another picture that maybe shows more of the general environment? Let me know what you think. Galiucc7 ( talk)
@ Userwikipediia, Lu7Liuc, Galiucc7, and Alagna2000:; Hi guys, I've changed the picture on the infobox since the last one only represented one villa and not all of them together but, I don't know why I'm no longer able to add a caption to the image, some of you could try to do it? I also modified the location part, let me know what do you think about it. LiucEs31 LiucEs31 ( talk) 13:44, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
@ Userwikipediia, Lu7Liuc, LiucEs31, and Alagna2000: I managed to add the caption on the image, let me know if it's good Galiucc7 ( talk)
@ Userwikipediia, LiucEs31, Lu7Liuc, and Alagna2000:; I created a Gallery section, what do you think? Should I add more images? Galiucc7 ( talk)
@ Userwikipediia, LiucEs31, Lu7Liuc, and Galiucc7:; we have to add some informations about the history, me and @ Lu7Liuc: are looking for them Alagna2000 ( talk) 17:13, 15 November 2020 (UTC)
@ Userwikipediia, LiucEs31, Lu7Liuc, and Alagna2000:; I added the sub-headings in the architecture part with some images. Let me know what you think
@ Yahya:; Hello, I just saw that you edited our page. Would you like to give us some advice perhabs something we should change? Galiucc7 ( talk)
@ Limelightangel:; Goodmorning professor Walker, we have some problems with references 9 and 10 but we cannot understand where the error is so we're not able to fix it, Could you please help us in fixing the error in those references? Thank You! -- LiucEs31 ( talk) 09:11, 21 November 2020 (UTC)LiucEs31
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