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Sahaib: the GA review has turned up noticeable copyright violations (see below). If these are not promptly fixed (say, within 24 hours) this will be a quickfail per the
GA criteria.
Sahaib, the review is about done. Just let me know if creating a map of Ludlow's route is something you want to do; if not, no worries, it won't prevent this article from reaching GA.
—Ganesha811 (
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12:27, 14 June 2022 (UTC)reply
Understandable. If you ever make a better one, add it! In the meantime, this article passes GA. I should say, though; another reviewer might have just quickfailed it on the copyright issues. That's was a big problem, and though you fixed it quickly, in the future, make absolutely sure your articles are free of copyvio before nominating them for GA. For now, though, congrats to you and anyone else who worked on it!
—Ganesha811 (
talk)
20:48, 14 June 2022 (UTC)reply
I have gone through and made prose tweaks myself, as is my usual habit. If there are any changes you do not like, just let me know and we can discuss. Provisional pass.
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline.
Pass - references check out and spot check shows the right sources are used in the right places.
2b.
reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
Earwig finds significant copyvios from the Guinness, Telegraph, and BBC sources, including but not limited to the following sentences and phrases:
He stopped in Texas for a few days to get his second coronavirus jab
Travis surpassed the minimum distance required to break the world record which is the Earth's circumference at the Equator when he flew from Donegal, Ireland, to Gibraltar on 9 July 2021
spokeswoman said in order to break the record he must supply an official flight log containing details of all take-off and landing times, as well as photographic and video evidence, and witness statements.
and arrived back after traversing four continents, 15 countries and 63 stop
he had an ambition to break the record for flying solo around the world in an electric aircraft.
Unable to find anything else notable or worth adding to the article. This would be unusually short for a GA, but an encyclopedia article doesn't have to be long. It's possible some would find its notability questionable (
WP:BLP1E) but GA review is not a notability review so I will not consider that here. Pass.
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see
summary style).
Pass, no issues.
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
Pass, no issues.
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing
edit war or content dispute.
Currently stable, no edit wars or issues on talk, pass.
6.Illustrated, if possible, by media such as
images,
video, or
audio: