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Tourism is a key part of the Indonesian economy, and something of great interest to foreigners. Unfortunely this contains no content :-( . For inspiration see articles for other countries like Tourism in Singapore. The category Category:Tourism_in_Indonesia contains some additional information and articles available for reference. -- Caniago 11:14, 4 April 2006 (UTC)
I'm not sure if the article is good if it has too many levels. Would it be better if the type of tourisms (nature, cultural, metropolitan(?)) to be placed at the first level? Some texts in under the "Main Attraction" heading can be placed on top, as the introduction. — Indon 13:25, 18 August 2006 (UTC)
I'm confused about the difference between notes, references and external links, though I've read WP:CITE. This article is full of outside links. I'm afraid if it is overcrowded with external links, it will confuse readers. I think we need to regularize these links. — Indon 09:59, 20 August 2006 (UTC)
Do we have any statistics on the percentage of foreign visitors to each Island? I think that would be a useful addition to the Statistics section. I've not been able to find anything yet. -- Bwmodular 09:18, 22 August 2006 (UTC)
Could you please insert citation sources in the historical context section? History of tourism in Indonesia can enrich the article, but having all negative views without reliable sources does not endorse the WP:NPOV and WP:V principles. — Indon 11:33, 22 August 2006 (UTC)
(from Indon's talk page - inserted without SatuSuro's consent but left here as an example of what should have been resolved on the personal talk pages rather than placing in an article talk page)
If you thought I was offline - I did not say that. I simply said I was not prepared to work on the tourism art in the next week or so, I have a large number of refs/citations on this issues that I simply cannot access at the moment - I did post grad research on the subject. :) I really think to pull a section of an article simply because I dont come up with them overnight is a bit too excitable for my style. I have to work on articles that people do not cleanup or fixup in 3 months, and you guys want one night or pull it? Come on be a bit more patient guys!
Maybe best if you want to do Indonesian articles you do them - and maybe If I contribute, you could communicate -directly- with me, so we can clear up any misunderstandings, as it has gone beyond the joke :) Be very careful wikipedia is for everyone - you must be aware that no one article is any ones possession ! Anyone can come in and edit and place any number of demands on what you think is good. Be careful, try not to take your edits and work too personally, or you will be dissapointed with wikipedia. Slow down, hati hati, and take it easy guys :) SatuSuro 10:35, 23 August 2006 (UTC)
It is exclamation (!), and you've edited my entry without my consent. I thought you didn't like your message to be put here. So what do you want now? Show everyone my mistake? I mo eng 11:46, 23 August 2006 (UTC)
See this article http://wikitravel.org/en/Indonesia - is that what you are trying to do here? if it is you dont need a history of tourism section in the first place - you're simply mimicing what is on another wiki :) SatuSuro 13:05, 23 August 2006 (UTC)
As I have tried to explain I have none of my tourism books to hand, they are locked up in a storage unit, so from help from database and library catalogues - could someone else insert these please as I am trawling the net and catalogues for more :) thank you!
Author: Indonesia. Vereeniging Toeristenverkeer. Come to Java : 1926-27 / Official Tourist Bureau. 3rd ed. Weltevreden : Official Tourist Bureau, [1926?] Description: 329 p. : ill., maps. ; 16 cm.
Domestic and International travel needs to have separate sub-headings - clogged together there is insufficient separation.
Domestic Tourism (?) or travel during Labuhan is possibly the largest number of people travelling at the same time anywhere on planet earth (once again my ref for that was from Kompas or Kedaulatan Rakyat from 1995 and is still in storage).
Domestic Travel or tourism is different from International in a number of significant ways. International tourists pay money to enter, therefore the revenue to government can be significant compared to orang ziarah or local people returning to home and family at significant times of the year. Yes? SatuSuro 10:34, 24 August 2006 (UTC)
What a really great collaboration, this is a very good start, guys! Cheers -- I mo eng 04:16, 27 August 2006 (UTC)
Again, about citation. Per WP:CITE, there are 3 different citation styles: embedded citation, Harvard referencing, and cite.php footnote. There is no requirement to which style an article should use, but if one citation style has been used, it must be used consistently. Mixing citation style is not allowed.
Now, looking to this article, it seems that footnote citation style is used, but it does not follow the guideline properly. I'm going to fix citation style to be consistent with the WP:FN, WP:CITE and generally WP:MOS. Also I'm going to see some unreliable sources per WP:RS and I'm going to use WP:CITET templates for consistent reference format. — Indon ( reply) — 09:21, 17 September 2006 (UTC)
This article failed good article nomination. This is how the article, as of September 17, 2006, compares against the six good article criteria:
When these issues are addressed, the article can be resubmitted for consideration. Thanks for your work so far. -- Fsotrain 09 19:47, 17 September 2006 (UTC)
Hey Guys,
I just created the Waterbom Park and Spa page so that can link to this page I just don't know where!
Scoreed 08:01, 27 May 2007 (UTC)
Since when do sunset photos get added to an article like this? its about as useful as a photo of a BRICK. pointless meaningless and could be anywhere on the planet - surely there is more to indonesia than that? Satu Suro 13:52, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
Very fitting as the 1992- (i think it went until 1997 0r 8) Visit Indonesia Year series is about to start again ( http://www.indonesiamatters.com/1324/visit-indonesia-year-2008/) - a reminder of the earlier series could not be more apt Satu Suro 14:02, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
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Could you please insert a guide to Bali prisons and bombing sites. I would like for the public to know the real Bali. (Unsigned item from 64.69.123.157 (Talk)
I notice that some recent edits have altered significant information however the source refs have been unchanged. Either the refs are in error and the article content has been corrected or maybe someone has just introduced a lot of now mis-attributed content. I have not reviewed all of the recent edits and have at this time only updated the 1st one I spotted ...for example
Tourism in Indonesia is an important component of the
Indonesian economy as well as a significant source of its
foreign exchange revenues. In 2008, the number of international tourists climbed to 6.43 million people, seeing a 13.24% increase in the flow of Indonesian tourism. The subsequent economical impact of this tourist influx saw $7.5 billion US dollars poured into Indonesia.
[1].
This refs to a table of information that is current up to including 2009 and yet the 2008 figures are given, access date is 2009. Nothing wrong with giving the figs for 2008 I guess but it is not up to date. The % increase is based upon what years? In 2008 it was 7.337 Billion not 7.5Billion and the most recent figure from that source states 6.3 Billion. Other recent edits may have similar problems as I note many other figures have changed whilst the source has not ie 7000 islands / 1000 islands
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There is such a continual attempt to play with the statistics section of this article, it has a very negative effect on this article.
Suggesting that a separate article be created that could have stronger protection and security from endless edit warring.
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Just trying out an alternative way of representing the statistics. I think if we would limit it to the top 10, it would look a lot cleaner. -- HyperGaruda ( talk) 14:49, 10 March 2019 (UTC)
Thanks for going to the effort of that - good idea JarrahTree 23:52, 10 March 2019 (UTC)
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