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The Falcon and the Winter Soldier created a highway more than five miles (8 km) long to capture visual effects for a truck action sequence for the episode "
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If anything, Wikidata item is created. — Vladlen Manilov ( talk) 16:31, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
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Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Dcdiehardfan ( talk) 20:40, 6 April 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Dcdiehardfan everything is really good except the hook needs work. Creating a five mile highway for a single scene of a single episode of a TV show is quite something, also currently the hook reads like the episode title is the name of the series or movie. I'd suggest something like ..... that the production team of The Falcon and the Winter Soldier TV series created a highway over five miles long to capture visual effects for a truck action sequence for the episode " The Star-Spangled Man"?
I haven't seen the show so I don't understand the signifcance of the birthplace of Martin Luther King Jr, if this could be explained more clearly in the article and hook that could be an option but currently it just sounds like a random fact. The development section mentions that the series deals with race once but this isn't clear how or mentioned in the hook Source: https://www.vfxvoice.com/taking-flight-with-the-falcon-and-the-winter-soldier/ John Cummings ( talk) 11:07, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
UPDATE: for **ALT6: that the production team of The Falcon and the Winter Soldier TV series created a highway over five miles long to capture visual effects for a truck action sequence for the episode " The Star-Spangled Man"Source: https://www.vfxvoice.com/taking-flight-with-the-falcon-and-the-winter-soldier/. Thanks to Dcdiehardfan and Favre1fan93 for taking part in the process and creating alternative hooks, I think we got to a really good place with it :) John Cummings ( talk) 10:26, 11 April 2024 (UTC)
- Dcdiehardfan ( talk) 23:41, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
I'm not going to propose a good article for deletion but this seems to fail WP:GNG. There's only one source that talks about this specific episode in detail and it's a review from within a week of release. Traumnovelle ( talk) 19:27, 7 May 2024 (UTC)