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The Flash
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02:55, 2 January 2010 (UTC)
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Hiya. I caught this quaint little article while sifting through GAN, and it's a sure-fire pass for GA. I'll be conducting the review in the manner of
Talk:I Married Marge/GA1 . Let's start. :)
The Flash
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02:55, 2 January 2010 (UTC)
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Lead
Short but to the point—nice.
Content
"Colbert explains in the introduction of his book[...]" → "[...]of the book[...]" as to not confuse readers that you're talking about a different book.
There's some times where it strays from "he explains" to "he commented," so please pick one tense to stick with.
Background
Please explain that his nephew and nieces are children before you refer to them as "the children."
Wikilink to
Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone .
Perhaps change "[...]began to notice mythology references in the book" to "[...]notice mythological references[...]"
Can you merge the second and third sentences in the last paragraph?
Publication and reception
Same as above—work with fixing tenses to be consistent.
"The Magical Worlds of Harry Potter has been praised for learning children about literature and history" → "[...]praised for teaching children[...]"
Please give a brief explanation about the Narnia book, like what you said about the Lord of the Rings one.
Images
Can you add one of
these images? From what I can tell, book FU images are like those of films and video games: infobox images are perfectly fine to use for identification purposes.
Both images are fine—but can you please add some ALT text?
Final say
To be done when above issues are taken care of.
GA review (see
here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written .
a (prose) : b (
MoS ) :
It is factually accurate and
verifiable .
a (references) : b (citations to
reliable sources ) : c (
OR ) :
It is broad in its coverage .
a (major aspects) : b (focused) :
It follows the
neutral point of view policy .
Fair representation without bias :
It is stable .
No edit wars, etc. :
It is illustrated by
images , where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have
fair use rationales ) : b (appropriate use with
suitable captions ) :
Overall :
Pass/Fail :
Nice work! I'm going ahead and passing it. Thanks for your diligence throughout. :)
The Flash
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03:25, 3 January 2010 (UTC)
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Thank you very much for the review! :)
The
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10:52, 3 January 2010 (UTC)
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