Use either "season two" or "season 2" throughout, at places where either of them are used.
I had been using "season 2" per numbering conventions, but changed this to "two" at start/end of sentences. Is there a different way to do it?
Kingsif (
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12:58, 9 November 2020 (UTC)reply
Lead
Unlink — "the show's cast" as this leads to the main article which is already linked in the previous paragraph. This link is fine in the "Cast" section.
Done - Note I have a draft of a cast and characters page, I assume it would be suitable to link this in the lead and cast section when promoted to mainspace?
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12:59, 9 November 2020 (UTC)reply
Background
"something confirmed by Manolo Caro a few days later." → "which was confirmed by Manolo Caro a few days later."
"Promotion for season 2 then revealed that the character had died, with shots of the funeral included in the season 2 trailer." — Avoid using "season 2" twice in one sentence. Perhaps change "in the season 2 trailer" → "in the trailer", as it is self-evident.
"having been a "mama's boy", he suffers a bit of an identity crisis" — It isn't very clear to me why the former would result in the latter. Maybe clarify that a little?
"Bruno has become progressively more drunk throughout the wake, unable to deal with his guilt and his unofficial babysitting role for Micaéla (Alexa de Landa), Ernesto's illegitimate child whose mother also died recently (at the outset of season 1) and who had been adopted by Virginia, but his parents are too distracted to notice." — This is a bit too long and confusing. Please consider splitting it into two or three sentences.
"making fans become more intrigued when the character Paulina says that she can't remember what happened at the funeral" — It doesn't sound right and needs some rephrasing. Something like → "making fans curious when the character Paulina says that she can't remember what happened at the funeral" could work?
"El Sol de México", "Balán, Ángel", and "Cueva, Álvaro" — Need work and/or publisher parameters.
ESdM is the author and work/publisher, and bots automatically remove the latter parameters when it's the same as author - the staff writing team for the paper are just named as the paper. Added for the other two.
Kingsif (
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13:08, 9 November 2020 (UTC)reply