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Initial cleanup

I went through this new article to copyedit, but had difficulty reading it because it didn't flow well. There seems to be some redundancy, and perhaps some factual errors? I tried to organize into sections; perhaps someone more familiar with the subject can be bold in editing and provide better section names, and verify whether I've put things in the proper location. — Scottyoak2 ( talk) 07:16, 27 January 2020 (UTC) reply