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Reviewer: Maury Markowitz ( talk · contribs) 12:16, 26 June 2020 (UTC)
I have a number of concerns with this article, and I haven't even managed to make it past the lede.
The material itself is fine, and reasonably organized and imaged. But it does need a good copyedit and the refs have the significantly trimmed. Nothing that can't be fixed within the GA period, but I am curious about the nom's desires here - do you wish to make edits yourself, or should I go at it? Maury Markowitz ( talk) 12:16, 26 June 2020 (UTC)
Thank you very much for the review and comments. Yes, it would be helpful if you can provide the suggested edits. I am new to this and would like to learn more. -- Renewableandalternativeenergy ( talk) 15:37, 26 June 2020 (UTC)
@ Maury Markowitz: Can you please let me know if there are additional revisions needed for the GA review? Thank you very much. -- Renewableandalternativeenergy ( talk) 18:41, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
Ok, back, sorry for the delays. Following the reviewer's guide...
I think this is good to go. Maury Markowitz ( talk) 15:57, 9 July 2020 (UTC)
@ Maury Markowitz: Thank you very much for the review, useful feedback, and the promotion to Good Article. -- Renewableandalternativeenergy ( talk) 00:51, 10 July 2020 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
Yoninah (
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21:00, 5 August 2020 (UTC)
Improved to Good Article status by Renewableandalternativeenergy ( talk). Self-nominated at 17:37, 9 July 2020 (UTC).
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Renewableandalternativeenergy: Have you done a QPQ or is no QPQ required here? Small point, but the "A" in "Accolades" should be lowercase. I've slightly tweaked the hook. Feel free to undo. Image license checks out, so image should be transferred to Commons.
Ergo Sum
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@ Ergo Sum: Thank you for the review and for the revision. I am new to this and I need to become more familiar with how the QPQ works. The image is already in Commons. Renewableandalternativeenergy ( talk) 01:39, 14 July 2020 (UTC)
@ Ergo Sum: The "A" in "Accolades" was revised to lowercase. Thank you for mentioning this. Renewableandalternativeenergy ( talk) 02:22, 14 July 2020 (UTC)
@ Ergo Sum: Thank you very much for the review and explanations. Renewableandalternativeenergy ( talk) 02:35, 14 July 2020 (UTC)
recording for this article because: "Good Article about new technology for the electric grid" And so I've done it. The file still needs editing for mistakes. Seeking criticism. Gallomimia ( talk) 06:36, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
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