The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that
Dua Lipa's character transforms into
Alita at the end of her "Swan Song" music video?
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Shouldn't you write electropop track in the lead for consistency?
I don't think it's placement in the lead really matters. I put it there just so the paragraphs don't look too overflowed.
LOVI3304:30, 20 July 2021 (UTC)reply
I was referring to the term "song" being used instead of "track", but they are interchangeable so this doesn't really matter. --
K. Peake07:13, 20 July 2021 (UTC)reply
"praised "Swan Song" for" → "praised the song for"
Mention the award after the above statement instead
"and reached the top 100 of" → "and also reached the top 50 of" cutting down the countries listed to these ones since top 100 is too many
"specifically with its" → "specifically with the"
"and eventually Alita. Lipa transforms into Alita" → "and eventually Alita, before Lipa transforms into her"
"complimented its sci-fi" → "complimented the video's sci-fi"
"as a "proper solo singles" instead" → "as a "proper" solo single instead"
"he said it" → "he said the song"
Uproxx should not be italicised
"named it "powerful"," → "named "Swang Song" a "powerful","
"easily be her next" → "easily be [Lipa's] next"
"praised "creative and" → "praised the "creative and"
"that "sparse where" → "that is "sparse where"
Done
Commercial performance
Make this the third para of the above section
"a peak of 24." → "a peak of number 24."
The charts after this are not in any numerical or geographical order; I would suggest doing the latter with European countries first, then American, then Oceanic