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"Ireland and New Zealand." → "Ireland, and New Zealand."
"The song was awarded a" → "It was awarded a"
"the US as well as" → "the US by the
Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA), as well as" with the wikilink, also add the names of the other organizations that awarded certifications
"It was complimented by" → "The video was complimented by"
Mention at least one of the live performances in the lead
Add commas around featuring English singer Dua Lipa
"vocal contributions from Lipa and
Jon B. as well as" → "additional vocals from Lipa and
Jon B., as well as"
Remove release year of the Usher song and the fact it is a single since this is not notable for the lead
"first verse before duetting with Beatty and weaving her vocals in and out throughout while" → "first verse, before duetting with Beatty and weaving her vocals in and out throughout, while"
"her vocals with the band." → "her vocals with Brockhampton."
"for its pairing of" → "for the pairing of" and use a more appropriate term for how the collaborators sound rather than "nice"
Done
Writing and recording
Remove commas around Iridescence
"debut the album lacked" → "debut, the album lacked"
"They attempted to go back to their roots where" → "Brockhampton attempted to go back to their roots, where"
Ref(s) should be invoked at the end of any sentences that have direct quotations
"referred to by Romil Hemnani" → "referred to by band member Romil Hemnani in retrospect"
"but the band ended up putting off" → "though ultimately abandoned"
"After the group invited" → "After Brockhampton invited"
Remove overly obvious wikilink on the English capital London per WP:OVERLINK
"on the guitar before Manwa" → "on the guitar, before Manwa"
"moved to the keys and bass before the latter played" → "moved to the
keys, bass, and
chords, prior to the latter playing" with the pipes
"At first it was just his" → "At first, the song consisted of his"
"and sweet" while also" → "and sweet", while also"
"darkness of the preceding" track" → "darkness" of the previous album track"
Remove the comment about the band accomplishing their goal per lack of relevancy to the song
"of the group's "most boy band-esque tracks" while" → "of Brockhampton's "most boy band-esque tracks", whereas"
"number" while comparing it to" → "number", drawing comparisons to"
"shows growth for the band" → "shows growth for Brockhampton"
"the band leans into their "capital-P Pop tendencies" while" → "Brockhampton leans into their "capital-P Pop tendencies", while"
"hook we're reminiscent of a" → "hook are reminiscent of a"
"song while mentioning that" → "song, alongside mentioning that" to avoid overusage of while
"summer" as well as" → "summer", as well as"
Start a new para for the rankings since they need to be separated from actual reviews, also merge the reviews up to Los Angeles Times with the above para in this context
"of 2019 with writer Dee Lockett noting that" → "of 2019; writer Dee Lockett noted that"
"in January 2020 before peaking at" → "in January 2020, a month before peaking at" removing the following month part, obviously
"in the UK." → "in the United Kingdom." and mention when it was certified as such
"The song was certified gold in Poland by" → "The song was certified gold by" because the country is mentioned at the end of this sentence, also add when it was certified as such
Mention when the Portuguese certification was too
"certification from the" → "certification by the" and mention the certification date
"the following month before" → "the next month, before" to avoid overusage of following