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"Initial promotion consisted of a headlining UK tour," I thought the opening sentence was referencing their January 2013 tour of the country?
"embarked upon a UK tour" → "embarked on a UK tour"
"Start the Party reached" → "The album reached"
"in the UK album charts, while "Start the Party" and" → "on the
UK Albums Chart. "Start the Party" and" with the wikilink; suggesting splitting since the last para is currently only two sentences long which is definitely too short
"said if the band removed" → "wrote that if the band removed"
"of the expletives" → "of the expletives on Start the Party"
"to Inglis, the record's" → "to Inglis, the album's"
"what the members were" → "what the band members are"
"in the UK album charts." → "on the
UK Albums Chart." with the wikilink
Merge the two sentences for the singles, changing where the second currently starts to being after a comma and saying: "while "Runnin' Scared" reached number 35 on the chart."
Wikilink
YouTube on the first of the eight sources
External links
Good
Final comments and verdict
On hold but good job on how smooth the refs mostly look, great to take on a review for you again after the backlog has finished! --
K. Peake11:13, 3 November 2020 (UTC)reply