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The result was: promoted by
Theleekycauldron (
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09:58, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
Improved to Good Article status by Bsoyka ( talk). Self-nominated at 19:46, 17 April 2022 (UTC).
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There appears to be some close paraphrasing that needs to be reviewed. --
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie ( talk · contribs) 17:10, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
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Overall, it's almost there. The first section could use a reflow to make the paragraphs less choppy, and there are two minor comma items, one minor reference item (and a suggestion), and alt text on the image. @
Bsoyka: 7-day hold.
Sammi Brie (she/her •
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17:30, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
holiday season, but- remove comma
November 29, 1940 at- MOS:DATECOMMA needed
A five-pointed star made up of white lights on a mountain during an orange sunset, with a tree silhouette in the foreground. Diff. Bsoyka ( talk) 19:54, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
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