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23:51, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
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Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.
Some Dude From North Carolina (
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23:51, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
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Non-free use rationale for the poster is in great shape!
In the infobox, why do the editors, along with the cinematographer need references?
Done removed
Chompy Ace
23:56, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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The theatrical poster doesn't include any "Story by" credits, so that needs references.
Done added with the BFI
Chompy Ace
23:56, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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"Screenplay by" should be "Written by" per the theatrical poster credits.
Done
Chompy Ace
23:56, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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For writing, J. J. Abrams is credited before Chris Terrio on the poster.
Done
Chompy Ace
23:56, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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In the second paragraph, the use of "score" feels repetitive.
Fixed
Chompy Ace
23:56, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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The use of "although" and then "and turned" sounds off, maybe change the latter to "it turned".
Done
Chompy Ace
23:56, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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"and it turned" → "it turned
Done
Chompy Ace
00:30, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
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"last time" → "last time for the franchise" or something similar
Done
Chompy Ace
00:30, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
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Remove the comma after "nearby".
Done
Chompy Ace
23:57, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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Remove the comma after "on the Falcon".
Done
Chompy Ace
23:57, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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Done
Chompy Ace
23:57, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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Everything thing else looks good.
The reference after "May 24, 2019" isn't working.
Done removed
Chompy Ace
23:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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A source is needed for filming being "pushed back to August".
Not done removed
Chompy Ace
23:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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"The Hollywood Reporter reported" seems repetitive.
Fixed
Chompy Ace
23:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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"The next day" - You never mentioned the original date.
Fixed
Chompy Ace
23:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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The reference after "to December 20, 2019" isn't working.
Done removed
Chompy Ace
23:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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What is the purpose of the note after "complete the story"?
Done removed
Chompy Ace
23:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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In this section, and in the rest of the article, change "Star Wars Celebration" to "the Star Wars Celebration".
Done
Chompy Ace
23:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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Add a comma after "December 18, 2019".
Done
Chompy Ace
23:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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"and was released" → "and were released"
Done
Chompy Ace
23:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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Done
Chompy Ace
23:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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The last sentence in the section makes it seem like "the same day" refers to December 14, so try rewording.
Not done per
WP:TRAILER
Chompy Ace
23:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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Both subsections here look good.
Remove the comma after "$300 million".
Done
Chompy Ace
23:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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Add a comma after "October 21, 2019".
Done
Chompy Ace
23:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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Done
Chompy Ace
23:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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Add a comma after "third weekend".
Done
Chompy Ace
23:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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Done added
Chompy Ace
23:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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What is the purpose of the following sentence?: "however, Deadline Hollywood did write that "we can't ignore" the less than stellar audience exit scores, which could affect the film's legs moving forward". Also, why is it written in present tense?
Done removed
Chompy Ace
23:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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Done
Chompy Ace
23:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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Done
Chompy Ace
23:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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What is the category sorting rule in the award table? Try to make it consistent (importance, alphabetical order, etc.)
Already done alphabetical order
Chompy Ace
23:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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Every single source is archived.
Link
Den of Geek and don't put it in italics per consistency.
Done
Chompy Ace
23:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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The reference after "November 25, 2019" is missing a website (
Screen Rant ).
Done
Chompy Ace
23:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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