Something has gone awry with the opening sentence. Removing the unwanted "the" before England would be a start, but it would still read oddly. I suggest something like, "St Mary Redcliffe is one of the largest parish churches in England, and according to some sources it is the largest of all."
"Lady Chapel" – capitalised here, but not in the earlier Architecture and fittings section. Most of the examples given in the OED capitalise Lady and about half of them also capitalise Chapel.
It does seem somewhat disproportionate to list the organists and choirmasters but not the vicars. That said, the GA criteria do not require an article to be comprehensive, and this strange imbalance is therefore not a bar to promotion.
They are not full lists and only "significant" ones mentioned in the sources are included. A full list of vicars would be massive and I have not seen a full list anywhere I have read.—
Rodtalk20:43, 2 August 2015 (UTC)reply
Thanks. I have attempted to address most of your comments above, but couldn't work out "last sentence of the second paragraph". Could you take another look?—
Rodtalk20:43, 2 August 2015 (UTC)reply
I'm not surprised you couldn't find them. I neglected to add a header. It is the second para of "Stained glass" to which I was trying to refer: Choir Aisles and North Transept (and West Window in the next para). So sorry for spreading confusion. Tim riley talk20:53, 2 August 2015 (UTC)reply