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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Soviet destroyer Serdity (1940)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Ed! ( talk · contribs) 01:33, 13 January 2019 (UTC) reply


Looking at this one. — Ed! (talk) 01:33, 13 January 2019 (UTC) reply


GA review (see here for criteria) (see here for this contributor's history of GA reviews)
  1. It is reasonably well written:
    Pass A few quibbles:
    • "after receiving a message that a German convoy had been spotted." -- Any idea of where that convoy was or how far away?
    • "Postwar, the wreck was raised in pieces and towed to Tallinn for scrapping between 1949 and 1952.[6]" -- does this mean it was towed from 1949 to 1952 or scrapped from 1949 to 1952, or both?
    • Dab links and external links show no problem. Fixed one dup link and no others are problems. Copyvio tool shows green.
  1. It is factually accurate and verifiable:
    Pass Offline sources accepted in good faith. A cursory check of the source material on Google in English sources backs up material cites in the article.
  2. It is broad in its coverage:
    Pass Appropriate context included from ship class article; additional detail really only has a place there for consistency.
    • Would prefer to have a unit cost, but records on this subject aren't common in the source material as I understand it.
  3. It follows the neutral point of view policy:
    Pass Healthy mix of book sources, in both Russian language and English text. No over-reliance on any one historian or source material.
  4. It is stable:
    Pass No problems there.
  5. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate:
    Pass One image included under public domain tag where appropriate.
  6. Other:
    Pass A few smaller details that could be clarified, but overall not by themselves enough to place the article on hold. So, passing for GA with comments noted above. Well done. — Ed! (talk) 05:10, 13 January 2019 (UTC) reply

Thanks for the review.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 16:10, 13 January 2019 (UTC) reply