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If you google some of the episode descriptions, they are listed verbatim on a few other websites as well. Were this descriptions pulled from wikipedia or did whoever added them here pull them from another source? I am not sure if this is the case for all of the episodes, but it was for the few that I googled. If anyone has any more insight, let me know, otherwise I'll have to add this page (and maybe the other seasons, I haven't checked) as having copyright issues.
PS2pcGAMER01:15, 27 December 2005 (UTC)reply
Correct Date?
While I am not 100% sure of this, I seem to remember the starting date of the series as before September 11th, 2001, not October 16th, 2001. Will someone please check into this
I think the overview needs to be shortened considerably. It is basically all the episodes summed together, when it should just contain major story arcs and plot lines.
Bignole04:48, 8 March 2006 (UTC)reply
I removed just about all of what was in the overview because it was the same information that was in the episode descriptions. The overview should be an overview, not the entire season detail for detail. The characters do not need biographies, they have their own pages for that. Only major plot points, like Lex and Clark becoming friends.
Bignole05:04, 8 March 2006 (UTC)reply
Why is Roger Nixon not mentioned in the overview? His investigation into CLark begins in episode four and new plot points in that arc are spread across episodes up till he finally discover's Clark's secret and fights Jonathon over it in the season finale.
Web wonder (
talk)
22:07, 6 February 2009 (UTC)reply
He's mentioned twice because that's all that he was ever relevant to any episode. He is mentioned in "X-Ray", and then finally in "Tempest" which is when he first confirms Clark's abilities and tries to expose him. Other than that, it's really minor and not really worth the added space. It's about keeping the plot descriptions simple and to the point. Nixon doesn't do anything on the show in the first season other than try and blackmail Lex, and then learn Clark's secret and try and expose him.
BIGNOLE (Contact me)22:15, 6 February 2009 (UTC)reply
Tina Greer
According to some on wikipedia, Tina Greer's goal is to be Lana forever. This is true at first, but later Tina realizes that she isn't jealous of Lana, she loves Lana. That's when she wants to be with Lana forever. Does anyone else want to confirm or disagree with this? I already know
Bignole's stance on this.
8.04
This is true, but not in Season 1. In Season 1 she wants to kill Lana and become her, but after she escapes from the asylum she wants a relationship with Lana, but that is in the later seasons.
Bignole
I think we need to remove all "lists" of music and have a music section and just discusses the music within the season. We can talk about how the show uses the music (really find a source that talks about it) and then just link to a page that lists the music for each episode. "Listing" is not good for an article, unless the entire article is about that list (i.e. List of Episodes). It's much better to turn it into a summary and then link to a list outside of wiki.
Bignole15:48, 1 December 2006 (UTC)reply
External links
External links with each section is appropriate in this case, since this page is trying to represent each episodes as well as a list of episodes. The problem can be solved with individual ep pages, of course, but
User:Bignole reverts any edits pertaining to that, so I guess they have to fit here. -
Peregrinefisher22:28, 9 December 2006 (UTC)reply
You have two websites where you are linking to every single episode about 1 topic. Per the MOS for External linking, you should avoid this for linking to the best link, which is the main page for that topic. The MOS for nesting the External links section is at the very bottom of the page, but we have 22 of those, one for every episode.
Bignole22:40, 9 December 2006 (UTC)reply
Three links per episode is excessive. The best solution is to have one link to each site at the bottom of the page that connects to the season summary, e.g.,
The article is of sufficient length at 30 kb. Please see
WP:SIZE for sizing conventions. 32 kb is the threshold, and even so, crossing the threshold doesn't necessarily force the need to break the article down into sub-articles. Also, in regard to readability issues, "The 32 KB recommendation is considered to have stylistic value in many cases; if an article is significantly longer than that, then it probably should be summarized with detail moved to other articles." The article is nowhere near a significant length. --
Erik (talk/contrib) @
23:01, 9 December 2006 (UTC)reply
This was Peregrine's purpose, to fluff the article so that he could use HIS individual episode pages which were supposed to be deleted, as a vote was cast with third party Admins telling him and Matt that most episodes cannot support an entire page by themselves.
Bignole23:10, 9 December 2006 (UTC)reply
I want to add well formatted info to this page. Stuff like relevant links and cast lists and summaries that would make sense to a non fan. Every time I do this Bignole tries to delete and minimize it so the article doesn't get any bigger. -
Peregrinefisher23:15, 9 December 2006 (UTC)reply
You were adding a cast name for the "fencing instructor", how is that even relevant? How are quotes relevant, because you wanted to add those as well. How is listing every song in the episode relevant to the encyclopedia, or detailing everything that happens in the episode? You wanted to add a lot of fancruft to the pages.
Bignole23:21, 9 December 2006 (UTC)reply
It originated as a proposed deletion for
List of Smallville episodes, which Peregrin set up a few months ago, after all the season pages had been established. But the topic turned to "individual episode pages" as Peregrine was linking the episodes to the individual pages he had created.
Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/List of Smallville episodes, the result ended with the majority saying keep the "Lists" page, but link to the Season page, and "don't create the episode pages".
Bignole23:20, 9 December 2006 (UTC)reply
Discussion for redirect
Since redirecting this page to the list of episodes is disputed, the change should not be forced. A census must be reached. Please use this section to present your side of the argument. —
Erik (talk/contrib) @
19:35, 11 December 2006 (UTC)reply
1.Seasonal Pages are accessible methods of format for TV show articles. 2.Individual Episode pages rarely support themselves per Wikipedia's own policies and guidelines about articles size requirement, notability, etc. 3. Five Seasons of articles were up long before the "List of Episodes" was established, thus seniority goes to the Season pages. 4.Votes carried out on other articles do not reflect that vote that already took place on this article.
Bignole19:39, 11 December 2006 (UTC)reply
How can you put a "voting is evil" link up, and then cite two instances where a vote was reached for a consensus. Also, Season Pages are not "List" pages, thus their criteria does not befall this page. Again, a consensus on "LOST" is not a consensus on "Smallville". Every page is different. Not even every Featured Article for a film looks the same.
Bignole19:45, 11 December 2006 (UTC)reply
Why is it necessary to redirect this page? The article size is not of an inconvenient length. There's enough notable information per episode that's represented on this article, so it doesn't require creating episode pages. —
Erik (talk/contrib) @
19:48, 11 December 2006 (UTC)reply
Per a link that Peregrine referenced awhile ago
Wikipedia:Centralized discussion/Television episodes#Dealing with problem articles. It states that if an article is too small merge it into either the main article, the list article, or the season article. Since there is a lack of verifiable information for every single episode of this show, there is no reason to have an individual episode for every one. Putting a reference in the plot (like you did with Metamorphosis, Peregrine) does not mean you have "verifiable information". There is no need to merge a seasonal page that was here over a year earlier with a List page.
Bignole19:52, 11 December 2006 (UTC)reply
The reason is that I want to add to each episode's info. For formatting reasons, the info doesn't fit well in the season page. For instance, links related to each episode, cast information, and better summaries. If I added 20kb of summary, will you agree to episode pages? I was hoping to get the linking worked out first, but if you'll give me a kb threshold, I guess I can work with that. -
Peregrinefisher19:57, 11 December 2006 (UTC)reply
What are you referring to? We don't need an infobox for every episode. Per Wiki's linking policy, it isn't a repository of links, so linking every episode is irrelevant. You are attempting to add information that is either unnecessary or violates some guideline or policy. This "Hothead" is the third episode of the first season of the WB original series, Smallville. The episode was written by Greg Walker and directed by Greg Beeman. It originally aired on October 30, 2001." and quotes are the only extra bit you have on the episode pages. Other than that, you have a different format. You have an infobox and you make an actual section to "lists" songs in the episode (when we already have soundtracks listed on the main article) and to list every guest start on the episode (even ones that played busy bodies on the street and had no real connection to the plot of the show).
Bignole19:59, 11 December 2006 (UTC)reply
The first stuff you mention is a page header. Cast, summary, and music info is what's verifiable about an episode. I guess your the magical judge of which cast member is important enough to go in a WP page, and my opinion doesn't count? -
Peregrinefisher20:11, 11 December 2006 (UTC)reply
I have an idea. You keep saying that you "want to do this and that" and this is your reasoning for dismantling the Season pages in favor or individual episode pages, but I have yet to see anything on the individual pages that supports the claim that it can be an article by itself. Why don't you do this, step back and go work on the
Pilot (Smallville episode) and one of the other pages that you created. Get those two pages into the condition that YOU say can support an article. Then, we'll come back and discuss those pages in comparison to what could be on this page, or what could not be on this page, whatever the case may be. I say 2 episodes, because the "Pilot" is too easy, you should be able to easily find plenty of encyclopedic content to support that page, because it's the Pilot and it got more coverage than the rest. I can honestly see the Pilot and some other key episodes, like the 100th episode actually being able to support itself with actual encyclopedic content. I say do another episode because I want to see how much verifiable, encyclopedic content you can find for some plain episode that doesn't have the significance of being the Premiere or the Finale, or the 100th episode. This will give every an idea of what kind of things can be found for these pages. I'm talking real encyclopedic content, not trivia you dig up on IMDb (i.e. Coach Arnold was possibly named after Dan Lauria's character on "The Wonder Years"). The pages must conform to the guidelines and policies of Wikipedia. If you can prove that it can be done, especially to some run-of-the-mill episode, then you'll have a case to redirect the pages. Because, right now you haven't proved that these episodes can actually follow the rules of Wikipedia and still support themselves as articles without requiring to be merge with something else.
Bignole20:16, 11 December 2006 (UTC)reply
That's all there is? I've looked at them. You have an expanded plot for a 40-minute show (unnecessary, Wikipedia is not a substitution for watching the show), what is the relevance of listing every song that appeared in the episode? How is that not fancruft(already on the season page anyway)? The point to listing every guest actor, even if they only appear for 2 second on the show, or listing the regular cast every time, even if they don't all appear in the episode? What external links? Linking to TV.com for every episode, when it can be accomplished by linking to the season once? Again, what is on your episode page, is already on the Season page. The big differences are that you make an entire section for 5 songs, and 2 guests, and an infobox for every episode that contains the same information on the Season page. Obviously if we can fit 22 episodes of the same information onto 1 page, and barely break 30 kb (when you it isn't even suggested to separate pages until you get to 50kb), doesn't that tell you right there that those articles cannot support themselves. See, this isn't a fight of what's right or wrong, or better or worse, it's a fight about what YOU like against what Wikipedia says.
Bignole21:01, 11 December 2006 (UTC)reply
Transition to individual pages
I moved this section down so it fits better chronologically. I was all ready to respond before I read the other comments by Peregrinefisher --
trlkly
Why do you keep doing this? You don't get your way so you go to another page, or start another section to try and get a different response. The information that you want to include shouldn't be included anyway. You ARE NOT following the parameters for creating an article about a tv show based on a fictional universe. You are creating articles that detail each episode with quotes, huge plots, music and useless trivia. Try actually working on something before you try and change it to your way.
Bignole20:12, 5 September 2006 (UTC)reply
Interwiki Links
My links to the
Smallville Wikia were deleted without discussion on the basis that external links... should be kept to a minimum; however, links to the Smallville Wikia re not external links, they are interwiki links as described at
Help:Interwiki_linking#Wikia. "Links to open wikis" are listed as
links normally to be avoided "except those with a substantial history of stability and a substantial number of editors." I think that
Wikia has a substantial history of stability or a substantial number of editors. Whether or not the same can be said of the Smallville Wikia is a matter of opinion, but it is my opinion that the pages I linked to are good pages, and the links to the episode pages are appropriate and beneficial. -
ErinHowarth05:24, 1 January 2007 (UTC)reply
Then I suggest that you add a SINGLE link to the bottom of the page, rather than a link to every episode. It's excessive and we've dealt with this issue on other seasons talk pages.
CovenantD05:50, 1 January 2007 (UTC)reply
External links need to be put at the bottom, one per external website. Maybe the confusion is that wikia is special because Jimbo Wales started it. It is special, but we can't give it preferencial treatment. There's a wikia link at the bottom, that's appropriate. The wikia links need to be removed from the other season pages as well. -
Peregrinefisher11:16, 1 January 2007 (UTC)reply
Merge
I'm proposing the merger of all Smallville episode pages (EXCEPT the
Pilot), to their respective season pages. I'm working on
new season pages, and I'm using the Smallville season companion books for sources. I have enough info for the pilot (see
User:Bignole/Small sand for how much I've done with the pilot), I may have enough for Metamorphosis and Tempest. I don't know about the latter two, because I haven't sifted through all the dilly dally of useless info that is in the books. I can say that there isn't enough info right now, on any of the articles to meet the criteria of individual episode articles. I propose to merge them all, and when all the info begins to unfold on the season pages (you can see the link I posted to see how it's going so far), that it be assessed from there. The problem is that even with the limited info in production for most of the shows, there is even less in regards to reception of those episodes.
The Simpsons (season 8) has reached FA status, and I think that with these new season formats we can get, in the least, all of the seasons up to GA status (hopefully FA status).
I oppose any such merge. Seems counter productive to myself, also remember
WP:NOT#PAPER and I see no benefit to merging into one large article as per
WP:SS. Plots are encyclopaedic content, that alone is enough for me to support an episode article.
Matthew07:26, 24 May 2007 (UTC)reply
Actually, plots are non-free content, because we are
replicating copyrighted material, and all these episodes are just plots. Quotes go to "Wikiquote", and I've even seen you remove "featured music" from pages. That leaves nothing but the plot. That can be covered on one page, especially when I have some actual behind-the-scenes information that will be there for the entire season. But, I never expected you to support it, you pretty much oppose anything I suggest. Also, remember size is based on "readable prose", which is not the number that appears on the edit screen (that counts every character on the screen). BIGNOLE (Contact me)11:09, 24 May 2007 (UTC)reply
I oppose everything you suggest? Please show me. I've not really seen many suggestions from yourself. Also, please show me where I've removed featured music.
Matthew17:09, 24 May 2007 (UTC)reply
You're right, I apologized. I confused you with two different editors. It was TheFilmaker who was removing music from the HOUSE episodes. The other was Peregrine. I apologize again, that was my bad memory. BIGNOLE (Contact me)17:23, 24 May 2007 (UTC)reply
Smallville hasn't got a bunch of excellent editors charging to improve as many episode articles to GA as they can like The Simpsons WikiProject, and there is also the notability criteria to consider. So if you can't really work at it for quite a while with making articles with enough content for so small a subject, I would suggest a merge.
Alientraveller11:31, 24 May 2007 (UTC)reply
Here's the thing about merging episodes: If each episode hasn't enough info for anything more than Stub-class, then it seems prudent to merge them all together. The only problem with this comes up with
WP:SS, as mentioned by Matthew.
Cliff smith23:20, 24 May 2007 (UTC)reply
I understand Matthew's concern, but the point is that we have no idea of knowing how big the season page will get, or could have gotten when the episode articles were created. They were done in such a rush that the season pages never had a chance to actually get expanded. Instead, both suffer from being articles that basically only contain expanded plots. Plots should only be expanded when you can find real world information that can be used along with them. People open an edit window and immediately see "44kb" (or another size) and think "oh this is getting too big". But article size is based on readable prose, and HTML, depending on what you are doing, can take up a lot of space. Right now, the season 1 page that I'm working on is about 21kb long, but only 10kb of that is readable prose. So the actual article size is 10kb, not the 21kb that includes all the coding in the tables, or the headers, or the huge infobox. That is why I propose the merger so that we can expand these season pages and see how large they will become. If any one particular episode becomes too large then we can break it off. But we shouldn't break them off just so we can write up a 500-600 word plot for each one. BIGNOLE (Contact me)23:30, 24 May 2007 (UTC)reply
I think some episodes can maybe be more than just plots, especially those that had spin-off "chronicles", notable events/characters show up (thus, more reviews/info on ratings and production) and stuff like that. I don't know what should be done. Whatever you think works best.
Davey405:04, 27 May 2007 (UTC)reply
Format
Also, so that it's a little more clear, express your opinion of the new season page format that is linked at the top. The above discussion is more in-line with determining mergers, and doesn't specifically ask about opinions on the new format.
Tomacknowledged his acceptance of the format (but making sure that I brought it here first),
Cliffdid as well, but I'd like some more formal agreements on this talk page first. (see
User:Bignole/Smallville seasons for the format) BIGNOLE (Contact me)00:54, 26 May 2007 (UTC)reply
Comment - Also, the new format will help in the problem with all the non-free images. Right now, those season pages have an image for every episode, and if someone wanted, they could come in here and removed them because there is no critical commentary on the page. The same goes for the individual episode articles. If any of those admins that run the "Reduce non-free images" Club saw the individual episode articles, they'd all have their images jettisoned too, because the only thing there is a plot that isn't sufficient enough to satisfy the criteria for non-free images. I've already seen them do it to film articles that had a film poster, but there wasn't anything on the page beyond a brief plot. BIGNOLE (Contact me)13:46, 28 May 2007 (UTC)reply
Support Wow, this looks so much better! I think the amount of white-space in the original may have fueled the "separate episode articles" concern. I especially like the linked titles, which can go to separate articles (when such articles are warranted) without having to reformat the page every time one is produced.—Preceding
unsigned comment added by
User:Trlkly (
talk •
contribs)
DONE - In finally finished putting all the prose into place. It needs a good copy/edit for wordiness, I'm sure, and for better word choices in general, but it's pretty much all done. I have a few more sections to go through, but they will most likely be used in clarifying certain points, as they are specific sections on the effects. The episodes are pretty much all done.
BIGNOLE (Contact me)17:03, 9 July 2007 (UTC)reply
I've merged the page to this one, as there were no objections. Now that that is there, I'm going to redirect the first season articles, as there is no longer a reason to have them since this page pretty much has all that information and loads more.
BIGNOLE (Contact me)20:13, 15 July 2007 (UTC)reply
Hello, I'm not seeing what part of
WP:NOT music fails -- so I've reverted your edits. It's OOU information, and certainly isn't indiscriminate. Feel free to bring it up on the discussion page if you feel differently, so that consensus may be achieved.
Matthew12:38, 13 June 2007 (UTC)reply
Somebody has apparently just added that, recently. As it states: "Original song lyrics for a television episode breach copyright. References to featured music should be supported by reliable sources to establish notability. Do not just list music: Wikipedia is not a directory." (a primary source is a reliable source, the episode is source), opening a discussion sounds good to me.
Matthew12:48, 13 June 2007 (UTC)reply
I've often found that music plays quite a significant part of an episode (often aiding in building a scene). Admittedly I've not seen past season one of Smallville yet... so I can't comment 100%. But it does seem relevant to me. I'd prefer it if we could get some secondary sources for the information as well.
Matthew12:55, 13 June 2007 (UTC)reply
I'm all for discussion -- I'd much rather gain consensus on the issue than edit war, and I'll start one after I return in about five minutes (if one hasn't already been started).
Matthew13:12, 13 June 2007 (UTC)reply
I've informed him that consensus was reached there, and that is he could turn it into encyclopedic prose then that was ok, but I feel
this section already covers it. I have also informed him that he has reached his 3 reverts for this 24 hour period. Also, I've already gone through the only 2 commentaries for the first season, for the pilot and the second episode. There is no mention of the songs beyond "that is a good song, and they are usually difficult to contract" on the entire two commentary reels. The makers obviously didn't put any emphasis on it. Also, "help building a scene" isn't relevant when you don't know what song was in what scene. BIGNOLE (Contact me)12:56, 13 June 2007 (UTC)reply
Simple list doesn't hold encyclopedic value. Matt says it helps build the scenes, ok, find third party sources that discuss Smallville's use of music to build scenes. Otherwise, that's just a personal opinion, that doesn't even help when you don't know what scenes go to which music. As of right now, it's simple trivia. BIGNOLE (Contact me)13:06, 13 June 2007 (UTC)reply
My opinions are irrelevant to the article, as they won't be listed. I would expect Smallville's music has been discussed, however. I'll have a look around -- some examples may strengthen my argument.
Matthew13:12, 13 June 2007 (UTC)reply
Everyone's opinions are irrelevant to the article, not just yours.
here's a source that mentions that most of the artists try and contract with TV shows because it helps their album sales. You can't simply have a list of music and say it's encyclopedic. Where is the value? A song name? This isn't a fansite. BIGNOLE (Contact me)13:17, 13 June 2007 (UTC)reply
I'm not sure what you are stating when you talk about artists contacting the shows. You then talk about fansites, please stick to the core issue: listing music. I quickly find a verifiable secondary source with a Google search (
click). The source is reliable, as per
WP:RS -- authoritative and has a history of stability.
Matthew13:24, 13 June 2007 (UTC)reply
Kryptonsite is an external link, and a fansite. They list all the songs for us (as they wouldn't be normally included as just a list). There is no encyclopedic value to them. Secondly, Krpytonsite hasn't updated their list in awhile. Have you found a secondary source that discusses the use of music in those episodes? You're simply creating a directory of songs to episodes. And yes, I'm searching alongside you. I'd like to see the music section expanded to include reasons why they choose songs, or at least some interpretations of what the songs do for the show. Otherwise, it's nothing more than a directory, that can be found on any fansite, or IMDB.com. BIGNOLE (Contact me)13:29, 13 June 2007 (UTC)reply
(edit conflict) Uh-huh, "Kryptonsite is an external link": Well, what was you expecting :-\? Being a fan site doesn't disqualify a website from being a RS... your average Joe fansite isn't a RS, though. Even if they haven't updated their list, that doesn't disqualify it from being a valid source for the episodes it has listed.
Matthew13:35, 13 June 2007 (UTC)reply
Ok, good. We have a reliable source (to some degree). I've checked the talk pages, seems the problem was rised once before but with no comments (Season 1 talk). The fact that songs appear in the episodes benefits to the singers and to the producers, presumably. Still, I don't find the fact that some song was featured in a particular episode significant for the episode as itself, but it might be a good idea to expand the Music section in the Smallville article. There, I find appropriate to mention that the episodes usually feature contemporary music hits and give some examples. --Tone13:32, 13 June 2007 (UTC)reply
IMDb contains the same list, and is probably updated with season 6 songs. The point isn't just verifying what songs were in the episodes, but why they were there. I read in The Stanford Daily, that Smallville may have/had the highest number of music artists per episode of any show. The problem is that the author is like "I think I heard somewhere", and I have yet to find the original source (which could have just been a friend on his). I think that would be good to have, because it discusses this marketing tool of using all these songs in one episode. I didn't say it disqualified KS, I said that it being there already gave us a link to a comprehensive list of every song on the show, as does IMDb. But that isn't what Wikipedia is about. As I stated, Wiki isn't a directory for songs. BIGNOLE (Contact me)13:37, 13 June 2007 (UTC)reply
(edit conflict) Good. Do we have a consensus? Of course, we can bring more people to the debate if you think we should. If you have time, could you expand the section some time in future? Funny, I know the series only briefly and I've seen just a couple of episodes. I came across the articles coincidently and corrected them. I didn't expect such a debate :-) Anyway, it was a constructive one, after all. --Tone13:41, 13 June 2007 (UTC)reply
I've been searching my 'work' butt off, but I haven't come across people discussing the importance of the music as a whole to the series, not even on an individual episode basis, which would help me expand the episode pages some more. Though, I'm limited to what I can view at work, a lot of the larger news organizations are in subscriptioned areas. BIGNOLE (Contact me)13:47, 13 June 2007 (UTC)reply
I'd do the count and prove that wrong, but when there are thousands of episodes in existence with their own article, I'm not going to waste my time. There are 40+ articles for Smallville in existence, and right now only 1 of them actually meets criteria. So, that makes (if we stick to just 40) 97% of them problem articles. If we were working in statistics, this article would the sample of the population. But we aren't, so I'll just reword my hypothesis to say that at least 90% of the Smallville articles have problems.
BIGNOLE (Contact me)16:10, 22 June 2007 (UTC)reply
State of article
This article, at present, is an a terrible state. Rubbish images, messy format, invalid citations, etc. I'm going to do some work on it in due course and make it more legible to bring it up to Wikipedia's quality standards.
Matthew14:51, 22 June 2007 (UTC)reply
I'm almost finished with the format I already proposed above (where you neglected to comment for over a month, and where others have agreed on it's new style).
BIGNOLE (Contact me)14:53, 22 June 2007 (UTC)reply
Rather I did not notice that discussion... your proposed format does look like an improvement, but I can see some downsides.
Matthew15:45, 22 June 2007 (UTC)reply
For one I only see a short synopses of the episodes, with no space for an expanded plot. Also a lot of the information is from a single source, you can't just simply replicate a book onto Wikipedia -- that would be a copyright violation. It's also a bit messy -- but it's certainly an improvement.
Matthew16:01, 22 June 2007 (UTC)reply
When it comes to production information, using one source is not as much a problem as one source for interpretations. It would be the same as using a DVD commentary (which I did use for the two that existed, so technically it's 3 sources). The information being used is merely the interviews from the people, I don't use Paul Simpson's person opinions of episodes, and a lot of the information is replicated on the DVD commentaries for the pilot and the second episode. If you can find other sources for it, great, but most likely they'll be quoting those books. I have taken the synopsis information under advisement. There is room for expansion, I just don't think we need information the size of what would be on an individual article when there won't be that much of for that episode to begin with. I can see them grow a bit, but I don't think they need to be the size of
what's on the season 6 page. If you look through my sandbox, since I have episodes separated, some episodes are really weak in the information department. Also, a lot of the time I'm explaining the scene in relation to the information. Gough and Millar might mention some CGI work that was used for an opening shot. Well, when you are watching the DVD and they are doing commentary, they don't need to explain what is happening in the scene, you're watching it. That scene may be too details to include in just a plot or synopsis, and works better if you are including real world information around it, as opposed to three sections below it. So there is also some of the "make them synopsis up top, and explain the scene, if necessary, next to the content that is describing it".
BIGNOLE (Contact me)16:08, 22 June 2007 (UTC)reply
Good article nomination on hold
This article's Good Article promotion has been put on hold. During review, some issues were discovered that can be resolved without a major re-write. This is how the article, as of July 25, 2007, compares against the
six good article criteria:
1. Well written?:This section shouldn't be kept unless it's expanded or referenced (preferably both) (Done).
2. Factually accurate?: More internet resources would be helful. At the moment, about half the refs are from the same book, which makes it hard to verify.
Need refs for this section
3. Broad in coverage?:Y
4. Neutral point of view?:Y
5. Article stability?Y
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GiggyUCP00:04, 25 July 2007 (UTC)reply
Only production information is cited in the book. I don't think there is anything wrong with citing a book. It isn't my fault if someone cannot easily access the book, and books are generally preferred. I also use the DVD commentaries, which are not easily accessable. As for the recurring characters, what's wrong with it? Referenced how? Do you want proof that those actors appeared in those episodes? What refs are you looking for in the plot section? The titles and air dates? The information in the plot itself? It's a primary source that is insinuated, the only thing I can do it probably cite the episode for you. I'm not sure what you want other than that.
BIGNOLE (Contact me)00:17, 25 July 2007 (UTC)reply
Yes, books are preferred, but it'd be nice if at least some of the information cited in the book is backed up by an internet source. It makes it easier for everyone, at it shouldn't really be that much extra work.
As for the recurring characters, yes, sourcing the show is acceptable, and encouraged. And I see you've
done this, which is good, so I've checked that off.
I'll go ahead and put the episode citations in. (
done) But, as for the production information, not much to go on. Other than IMDb, which I refuse to cite when it comes to "trivia" (which is where they keep their production information) there isn't a lot of interviews with this level of detail on the internet. I've checked. At least not coming from anywhere other than fan sources. I understand your apprehension about not being able to easily check what a book says, and I get the same way when I visit other articles, but I work with what is available. When it comes to production info, the only thing I've come across are the official companions for each of the seasons, and the DVD commentaries, which I used also. If it was that easy, I wouldn't have bothered to buy the companions...then again, there were a pretty good read. Lots of stuff I couldn't use, but they seem to be the only source that contains enough interviews with the cast and crew to find out how they made the episodes. I don't think it's any different then
Tyrannosaurus which is almost nothing but books and journal sources. At least I only have 15 sources which are not urls.
BIGNOLE (Contact me)03:48, 25 July 2007 (UTC)reply
Over the past months, TV episodes have been redirected by (to name a couple) TTN, Eusebeus and others. No centralized discussion has taken place, so I'm asking everyone who has been involved in this issue to voice their opinions here in this centralized spot, be they pro or anti. Discussion is here
[2]. --
Maniwar (
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Copy editing questions
In the Production/Writing section (in the first paragraph), it says "The problem was not fully resolved at the ending of "Cool", as Sean Kelvin (Michael Coristin) is frozen inside of a lake, and his fate is not certain." To the uninitiated this seems like a non-sequitur. Does it indicate there's an exception to the Belle Reve plot device? Jim Dunning |
talk18:05, 23 February 2008 (UTC)reply
This particular instance was an exception. In reality, it isn't an important sentence. It was merely stating that in this episode the "villain" didn't kill themself, nor did they end up in Belle Reve. If you think it's slightly unclear, it's probably ok to just remove it entirely.
BIGNOLE (Contact me)18:09, 23 February 2008 (UTC)reply
Just regarding the quote table with the "As [Lex] touches one of the flowers," don't you think the background colour doesn't blend in with the rest of the page. It would look really good if you change it to the colour of the table of episodes. Corn.u.co.piaDiscussion07:17, 27 February 2008 (UTC)reply
I've never seen a quote box as anything other than either blue or grey. I would think that if it was that rust color of the episode table that it would be distracting. I've changed it, let me know if you think it looks distracting though.
BIGNOLE (Contact me)12:11, 27 February 2008 (UTC)reply
I thought about suggesting this color change myself a couple of days ago because I like color themes, but since it is such a minor issue and probably a personal preferance, it could go either way. –
sgeurekat•c12:19, 27 February 2008 (UTC)reply
Well, which do you prefer? If more people prefer the blue (or even the grey box - which is a different format altogether), let me know. Right now I'm indifferent to the new color, so I could go whatever way the majority want.
BIGNOLE (Contact me)12:42, 27 February 2008 (UTC)reply
I like color themes, so I like it to be orange. But this is nothing I would lose sleep about, so whatever works best for you, Bignole, go with it. –
sgeurekat•c12:52, 27 February 2008 (UTC)reply
I was having a look through the comments for the FA nomination page, when I noticed a user wrote that the info was being neglected by the large episode table. I kinda agree. If you look
here, you'll see a terrific example of how nice it looks with info first. The table itself on the other page is much more modern and nicer; less bulkier too. Please consider my suggestions. Corn.u.co.piaDiscussion12:30, 6 March 2008 (UTC)reply
First, I followed the standard for film and television articles, which is that the plot comes first. The reason being, you need the context to understand what they are doing. I used to believe that page structures should be based on when they happen (i.e. Production, Plot, Release, Reception, Awards), but I've come to acknowledge the necessity to understand what the production is talking about. Everything that exists below the plot is not be "neglected". It's completely developed. If someone doesn't read it that is their issue, they probably wouldn't read it even if it was at the top. If someone wants to read an "article", then they read the entire thing. If they want to read the plot information, then that's all they read. The Table of Contents is right there at the top, so it's clear what information is on this page, and where exactly it is located.
BIGNOLE (Contact me)12:44, 6 March 2008 (UTC)reply
OK. I see you probably aren't going to change your opinion anytime soon, so I'll let it go. But could you please change the table, and make it like the one
here. The current one is VERY bulky and really doesn't look good. If it's not too much trouble, of course. Thanks. Corn.u.co.piaDiscussion06:59, 7 March 2008 (UTC)reply
Wait, are you talking about the code size, and not the appearance size. Because, other than the coding size, they are virtually the same table. The main differences are that we don't list a "Featured Guest", because Smallville doesn't always have 1 single guest star...they don't always have any guest star for that matter. That, and this page has a color trim with the individual episode details, which I like, and also keeps up the theme established on the
LOE page.
BIGNOLE (Contact me)13:08, 7 March 2008 (UTC)reply
Episodes would evolve from basic questions such as: "what if someone had a crush on Lana, and acted on that obsession"; "what if someone found out Clark's secret"; "what if someone else had Clark's powers?"
The ratings are in the process of being added to episodes and I would add production codes to be comprehensive/encyclopaedic.
[4]
Try to mention any notable cast appearances from people not in the pilot. Kelly Brook's four episode arc springs to mind.
[5]
Tollin/Robbins Productions & Warner Bros. should probably be mentioned as producers
The only other things are to get references consist, so for citeweb use "first=" and "last=" fields to give "Surname, Forname" like the book ref and to remove bold links to satisfy
WP:BOLDTITLE.
As far as production codes go, TV.com (which is part of EPguides.com) is considered as reliable as IMDb. Production codes for most shows are difficult to accurately attain. I've also seen the codes as 1.01, 1.02, etc. Where are you wanting to add Tollin/Robbins and Warner Bros. exactly? They aren't the "producers", as that is a specific title for a person. They are merely the production companies involved. I don't recall too many articles that list all of the production companies involved in a show. I'm also not sure about the boldface. Are you asking to remove the boldface from the episode titles in the table? Or, are you referring to the lead section? The only thing I can find closely talking about the lead in relation to the season 1 article is: "If the topic of an article has no commonly accepted name, and the title is simply descriptive—like Electrical characteristics of dynamic loudspeakers, Effect of Hurricane Katrina on New Orleans, or List of schools in Marlborough, New Zealand—the title does not need to appear verbatim in the main text; if it does happen to appear, it should not be in boldface". If that's the case, then "season one" is recited verbatum in the body of the article (many times), so it would be bolded.
BIGNOLE (Contact me)19:49, 9 August 2008 (UTC)reply
I just used epguide as it listed them all at once, they are listed individually here,
Ep 1,
Ep 2, etc. The production companies would go in the production section of the season, and seem to fairly standard practice in featured seasons (
[6],
[7],
[8],
[9],
[10]). As for
WP:BOLDTITLE "Do not link words in the bold title" i.e. the word smallville in the lead
Do you see a problem with those production numbers?
There is one number here, and
a completely different number here. The second number, though from a more reliable source, has no actual value (neither does the other). It doesn't tell the reader anything they need to know. If it's whether they filmed the episode in one order or a different one, well that is covered in the production section. It seems to be a useless bit of information about the episodes, and one that is difficult to verify.
As far as Tollin Robbins goes, where in the production would you like that. It seems to be an obscure statement about what companies fund the show, which is probably good for the general Smallville page, but not so much for the specific season (or even episode) articles. As far as those other pages go, you're comparing a list page to an article, which is formatted different, and contains different info. If you look at those season lists, they are doing just that, listing everything they can about the show (often repeating info each season) in prose form.
I fixed the link to Smallville that was being bolded
[11].
I just noticed your Kelly Brook comment. There isn't a casting section (it's covered on the main page, as well as the pilot, and the
Characters of Smallville), so I don't know what you would do with Kelly Brook. Just like "listing" actors in a section (which has no real value), just listing "notable guest stars" has no real value. Her name is in the plot section (which, btw, you made me realize that the plot section never resolved her final appearance on the show...
and I just took care of it), and she isn't covered in any reliable, third party sources (not even any primary sources like the companion novels either) beyond a "Kelly Brook portrays Victoria Hardwick" statement. Otherwise, she would have been given a section at
Characters of Smallville, instead of a name listing in the list at the bottom of said page.
BIGNOLE (Contact me)23:22, 9 August 2008 (UTC)reply
I don't see a problems with the numbers, check again they are the same. I am well aware that the cast and production companies are covered elsewhere. My point is that they are an important part of the season and as it stands would not be covered within the season topic. A featured topic needs to be "covering a subject comprehensively." Also
I have made the refs consistent.Rambo's Revenge(talk)12:08, 10 August 2008 (UTC)reply
I see the number now. I still stick to the same belief that it is a useless number. As for the company, how is it an important part of the season itself? It's an important part of the show, but not to the season itself. Also, being comprehensive does not mean including everything, regardless of how miniscule or non-related it is to the topic. Tollin Robbins and WB are companies that provide money, it is the people that work for them that actually decide things for the show; anyone important enough to know in that regard is already noted. Back to the cast part; important part of the season? Eh, she was a bit player in 4 episodes. She was never heard from again, and she really did nothing to develop anything in the show. She is mentioned in the plot section. Apart from that, that's all there is. You cannot (and should not) create an entire section to just list actors names that one deems "notable to the season", just because there isn't any real world information about their roles on the show. That's placing
undue weight on their performance, which obviously wasn't notable enough to get recognized by reliable sources independent of the subject. As for the refs, I don't use "first, last" dividers because they take up more space than simply using "author" and placing their names in the "last, first" position. The same with the "authorlink". Why add three sections when you can accomplish all of it with a single section?
BIGNOLE (Contact me)12:30, 10 August 2008 (UTC)reply
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