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Silk Way Airlines Flight 995 was a Engineering and technology good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake. | ||||||||||
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crashed near Kabul in 2011 were repelled by gunshots? |
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Reviewer: Retrolord ( talk · contribs) 13:12, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
Ok, I have reviewed the nomination and failed it. Please address the problems before reonimating. Thanks, ★ ★ Retro Lord ★★ 13:12, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
" informed that the" That doesn't flow very well, could you change that please?
"18 tonnes (18 long tons; 20 short tons)" Can we have a different measurement set-up thing here?
" with base in Bagram" Poor grammar, please change
"at the airport of destination" A bit redundant/unneccessary
"3,500-metre" 3,500 metres
"broke up in 10 to 20 pieces" That doesn't flow very well, can you change it please
"Parvand Province" Why does this link to Parwan province instead?
" Despite a British Major, who was the spokesman for the coalition forces led by the United States in Afghanistan, confirming that no activity from the rebels had been registered in the area of the crash at the time the accident took place,[1] several attempts to reach the crash site were repelled by gunshots" Poor grammar, the sentence is too long, and the second half seems irrelevant
""almost impossible" to be carried out" Redundant 'be' and it needs a citation as its a direct quote
"that the Talibans" Taliban is not pluralised
Further that, what kind of nominator are YOU, if you haven't bothered to proofread before submitting this drivel. ★ ★ Retro Lord ★★ 20:53, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
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