It's one of the designations used for
Ashur, Assyria's national deity (for an example of usage of the phrase where that is more clear, see
here). I'm not sure how this is best made clearer in a non-awkward way in the article.
Ichthyovenator (
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23:50, 8 April 2021 (UTC)reply
The succession box mentions Marduk-apla-iddina II, but he does not appear in the main article at all, nor is a different succession in Babylonia discussed.
Marduk-apla-iddina seems to have kind of come out of nowhere and seized Babylon's throne after Shalmaneser's death before Sargon could be crowned in the south as well, so he can't be incorporated into this article in a significant way. I've added a sentence about Marduk-apla-iddina to after the article talks about Sargon dealing with the "guilty Assyrians".
Ichthyovenator (
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12:00, 9 April 2021 (UTC)reply
Sources look good, but be consistent in providing (or not) locations for the books.
Otherwise, this is a well-written article, packed with information but presented in an accessible manner. The information is cited to reliable sources and conflicting views and interpretations are discussed, apparently to an up-to-date standard. A spotcheck of references showed no copyvio problems. Once my remarks above are addressed, I will be happy to promote this.
Constantine ✍ 08:24, 5 April 2021 (UTC)reply
Thank you for taking the time to do this review. I've addressed most of the remarks - will see about finding a source on the origin of the modern rendition of his name.
Ichthyovenator (
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12:26, 9 April 2021 (UTC)reply
I think you can add a note about it with {{efn}}. It won't, in a way, disrupt the quote, and would give an explanation for the reader. If you decide to go with it, don't forget to add a separate "Notes" header with {{Notelist}}. --► Sincerely: Solavirum11:56, 17 April 2021 (UTC)reply
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Ichthyovenator: Hi, I've come to check this review, hope all is well with you. This isn't a person I had any knowledge of, but the article is well-written, all the review points have been met, and I'm impressed by the sources. I have one note before I'll promote this: there are two "Mark, Joshua J. (2014)" web sources, and one of them doesn't seem to be referenced properly. Best,
Kingsif (
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12:51, 24 June 2021 (UTC)reply