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The caption isn't needed since it's the same on all formats
Lead
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I would add "single" before trilogy so readers aren't confused
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You list "J-pop" in the infobox, but "Japanese pop" in the lead, so make both of them the same please
Songwriting is one word
Change to "...making it Hamasaki's best selling single."
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Nada
Background and release
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The hidden text isn't necessary here; if you find it necessary, I would avoid shouting
Remove the "s" after seconds in the audio sample description
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I would switch around this paragraph and the first one; I don't know, it flows better in my opinion–what are your thoughts on this?
Instead of "describes Hamasaki's future", I would say "predicts Hamasaki's future"
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"making videos" → "making-of videos"
Change to "The CD and digital cover sleeve have an image" please
Critical reception
Again, songwriting is one word
The third sentence uses the word "singled" but I'm not sure what it's trying to say/what it means
100% of the votes? Are you sure? Does that mean every person who voted picked this song?
Commercial performance
Add a topic sentence stating that "Seasons" was a success please
Remove "at" after "Vogue/Far Away/Seasons" reached..."
The third and second to last sentence should use a semicolon to separate instead of a period (full stop)
Music video
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Outtake is one word
Synopsis
Superimposed is also one word
Change "with a video of two children" to "with a scene of two children" to reduce the amount of "videos" in that sentence
Live performances and other appearances
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Are there available links to any of the tours you mentioned in this paragraph?
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Same with above, are there any available links for the concert performances that you mentioned? Add if applicable please
You can add the years to the concert tours in parentheses after the tour name please (I would highly recommend this, especially since some tours last over several years.)
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List the actual albums instead of saying "The list is:..." like you did in my other review comments from previous articles you nominated
Credits and personnel
The first column (if odd) should have the extra bullet point
I don't think "Avex Trax" needs to be included here, so if you remove it, it would also take care of the above problem/comment
Track listing
Pluralize the title and add "formats" so it reads as "Track listings and formats"
Charts and certifications
Certification
What does it mean to be certified "Million"?
If million is a certification, you need to pluralize the section subtitle to "Certifications"
References
Like with the rest of my reviews, please double check that only one link is provided for each publisher/website/etc. Thanks!