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This article is among several under discussion at WP:COIN, per its creator's general declaration of paid editing, which has not been disclosed for this article in particular. I have tagged the article for COI. The tag should only be removed by an independent editor after he or she has reviewed the article for NPOV, sourcing, and NOTABILITY; who ever does that, please leave a note here. Thanks. Jytdog ( talk) 11:40, 29 April 2015 (UTC)
I am a paid contributor and created this page for the company. Djhuff ( talk) 11:48, 29 April 2015 (UTC)
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Under the "Awards" section, I'd suggest adding this: In 2018, founder and CEO Tom O'Hanlan received the Outstanding Manufacturing Lifetime Service Award at the 2018 South Carolina Manufacturing Conference and Expo. [1]
I would also ask an independent editor to review and remove the template message at the top of the page. In reviewing the history of the page, it seems that any business puffery has been edited out since it was first added in 2014. The article is well-sourced and, along with this updated award from 2018, I would suggest there is enough evidence to be considered notable.
Codylthomas ( talk) 16:54, 13 January 2020 (UTC)
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In the previous request, I had asked for the template message at the top of the article to be removed by an independent editor. This request was not directly referenced in the reply received. Therefore, I am again asking for this template message to be removed. The content in the article is well-sourced and devoid of marketing puffery. If the template message can't be removed, I would request an editor to delete the article completely. Either the article is well-sourced and meets enough notability criteria to exist without the template message or the article doesn't meet the criteria and needs to be deleted completely. Thank you. Codylthomas ( talk) 20:39, 4 February 2020 (UTC)