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and ballads elements. → This doesn't quite make sense. Maybe elements of balladry would sound better.
Done Re-written.
its musical elements to that → Not the right word, use structure or composition instead of elements. Elements would be a specific part, but the critic is generalising.
Done Re-written.
produced and wrote "Scream" along with Usher and Savan Kotecha. → Implies that Usher and Savan also produced it.
Done Re-written.
recorded in MXM → recorded at MXM
Done
Link mixing
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I think you should mention Pop and Adult Pop in the Chart performance
Done
The song was performed during E3 2012 to promote Dance Central 3 in which Usher performed choreography portrayed in the video game to the attendees. → Need a source
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