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The result was: promoted by
AirshipJungleman29
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17:35, 7 January 2024 (UTC)
Created by Maury Markowitz ( talk). Self-nominated at 17:28, 14 November 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Sasuke vs. Commander; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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Hook eligibility:
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Maury Markowitz: it looks good, but I am not convinced by the structure of the hook. One would expect but to introduce a contrasting clause, but in this case I don't see how it is contrasting with the first statement. It would perhaps more interesting to introduce it as "one of the first videogames with boss fights"?
Broc (
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13:30, 29 December 2023 (UTC)