The sentence " He batted and threw left-handed" seems out of place
Can "triceps tendinitis" be wikilinked?
Early life
Birthday not sourced
Can the mother and father info not be combined since they use the same reference? Such as, "His father is Australian celebrity trainer Rob Rowland-Smith, known as "The Sandhill Warrior," and his mother Julie is a retired high school physical education teacher."
I would also add sister's information under early life
Are two references needed for "Rowland-Smith started playing baseball himself at the age of 12"? Can one be moved to cite the cassette paragraph?
Reference #3 doesn't support his high school fact
The reference given (which I believe is [1]) actually does - if you look at the bottom right corner of his picture, you should see "High School" hidden up there just below his chin.
Sanfranciscogiants17 (
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01:15, 16 April 2020 (UTC)reply
Please try and find a better reference than a stats site for his pro career debut
The rookie-level Mariners don't get a whole lot of coverage, being a low-level minor league team. Rowland-Smith's debut probably wouldn't even have been mentioned in an article about the game, if there was one. This is really only notable in the context of an article about Ryan Rowland-Smith. The source is considered reliable.
Sanfranciscogiants17 (
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01:15, 16 April 2020 (UTC)reply
Reference needed for "After the season, he pitched for Lara in the Venezuelan Winter League"
Post-playing career
"Rowland-Smith is currently a baseball television analyst for Root Sports Northwest..." try and avoid the use of currently. Maybe state when he began as a television analyst (which appears to be
2017).
Please archive the link for NxtGen Baseball through the
Wayback Machine
"Rowland-Smith was married in 2013 to American actress Amanda Aardsma.[11] Amanda is the sister of Rowland-Smith's former teammate David Aardsma.[66]" can be merged into one sentence
Try and not have single sentences. Please try expanding on his Ninja Warrior activity and blog (at least 2-3 sentences).
SB Nation is a blog
I'm having trouble finding sources that give his results from American Ninja Warrior, so rather than rely on a blog, I decided to take it out, rather than cite with unreliable sources. I did add info about his excitement in participating in the event.
Sanfranciscogiants17 (
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01:39, 16 April 2020 (UTC)reply