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It's really admirable for you to take on making an entirely new wikipedia page for Rosario. I'm glad that your concerns about her notability seem to be somewhat unfounded as it looks like you've already found a decent amount of information delineating her accomplishments. My main suggestion would be to see if there's a way you could go into specifics about the "place names, songs, and cultural knowledge" that she was able to salvage (references permitting, of course). I find that that may be a good way to highlight some achievements & knowledge that may not normally be highlighted while still maintaining wikipedia's codes of neutrality. ALSO doubled check your "born" and "died" dates in the sidebox as I think you may have a typo. Another point of interest is your "Work with J.P Harrington" section, I'd be careful not to highlight his contributions over Rosario's (esp. since he already has his own page) and if you could find specifics about the processes used to reconstruct the language that would greatly increase the quality of your article! — Preceding
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00:46, 14 November 2018 (UTC)reply
my response to peer review:
haha yes I did mess up the dates, so I need to fix that! and yes I intend to go into more detail in the work section, I just haven't had time yet
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04:47, 14 November 2018 (UTC)reply
Edits as of 11/18/18 (edits/exercise 12 as of 11/29)
I moved article to mainspace, but still need to:
clean up the songs/wax cylinders information in the Work section (done)
research whether the Northern Chumash language is considered extinct/endangered and whether the Tribe has anyone who speaks it now? (done)
waiting for email back about use/public domain of Rosario Cooper's photo to use in article
add to legacy section (done)
double check my references list (done)
add to related Wikipedia articles and WikiProjects (done)