Alright, I'm jumping into here, as this article comes recommended as a reasonably easy pass, though I have yet to see it for myself. I'll be back for a review in a day or two. --
ProtoDrake (
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20:29, 31 March 2015 (UTC)reply
Review
Generally good, but spotted a few things:
This is optional, but removing the brackets formatting from around the cover art so it automatically fits within the infobox might be advisable.
"Unlike previous Resident Evil games, Resident Evil 3: Nemesis was designed to have a more action-oriented gameplay." - the "a" is redundant within that sentence. It should be removed.
"...created by Umbrella for the sole purpose of eliminating surviving STARS members, who are first-hand witnesses of Umbrella's unethical and illegal experiments." - This is purely optional, but I would think the word "illegal" would also cover "unethical". As I said, optional. You can leave it as is if you prefer.
"When Carlos leaves the hospital, a large amount of explosives explode in the hospital's main lobby." - in what way is this relevant? Also, if it is relevant, two "eplo" words so close together looks a little odd. Maybe "detonate" rather than "explode".
Thank you for your helpful review, really appreciated. I think I have addressed all the issues you had with the article. Please let me know if there is anything else that needs to be fixed. --
Niwi3 (
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22:20, 2 April 2015 (UTC)reply