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16:27, 19 June 2023 (UTC)
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GA review (see
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It is reasonably well written .
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar) :
b. (
MoS for
lead ,
layout ,
word choice ,
fiction , and
lists ) :
It is factually accurate and
verifiable .
a. (
reference section ) :
Citation 22 is missing an author although it is applicable
Fixed.
Sewageboy (
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19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
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b. (citations to
reliable sources ) :
c. (
OR ) :
d. (
copyvio and
plagiarism ) :
It is broad in its coverage .
a. (
major aspects ) :
b. (
focused ) :
It follows the
neutral point of view policy .
Fair representation without bias :
It is stable .
No edit wars, etc. :
No edit wars, only 2 reverts, one by an ip vandal, the other was someone who undid their own edit
It is illustrated by
images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have
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appropriate use with
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Overall :
Pass/fail :
I have just a few suggestions that I am going to list here to improve the article
In the early life section, the source provided doesn't give the name of Detmers' mother
Could we get stats provided for the cape cod season
Could we split the major leagues section in to each year with a level 2 heading (example): 2021: (something that happened), 2022: (something that happened), 2023: (something that happened) (without the parentheses)
Needs to be updated for the 2023 season
I believe way down at the bottom of the article, in the awards and achievements box, there should be one for pitcher of an immaculate inning, correct me if I'm wrong
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@
Cherrell410 , I've made the requested changes. Let me know if there are any other concerns.
Sewageboy (
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19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
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