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That depends, is the title of the bar "Brig" or "The Brig"? I looked it up and it was called "Brig", so I will de-capitalize it and then pass the article. Thanks for your quick responses! Always a please working with you. Cheers,
Carbrera (
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20:14, 17 June 2016 (UTC).reply
Would it be alright if you reworded "It hosted drag queens, live music, special events, and viewing parties." to "It hosted drag queen shows, live music, special events, and viewing parties." (I think it sounds it a big odd with "it hosted drag queens"; what do you think? Or maybe even "drag queen events"?)
I don't know; Ruth Brown's Williamette Week's quote is a bit too large; you could probably condense it and the reader would still get the same information from it
Firstly, I realized this quote is more of a description than commentary about an experience one had at the bar. I moved this quote to the Description and history section. I like this quote as an opening description of the bar. It describes the clientele, a feature (dance floor), its diversity/inclusiveness, and offers a little commentary about its surroundings (people wandering in and out). How do you feel about this text move, and what are your thoughts on shortening? ---
Another Believer(
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To be honest with you, I think it was better where it was originally placed. And I guess I can't really think of a way of shortening it without something important being removed. May you revert that edit?
Carbrera (
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19:37, 17 June 2016 (UTC)reply
Fantastic work @Another Believer! I am placing it on hold for seven days to allow for any changes. I know Legobot hasn't been working in the past 24 hours, so I hope you see this notice ASAP. Please feel free to contact me me with any questions, comments, or concerns by @PINGing me here. Thanks and good luck! Cheers,
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03:15, 17 June 2016 (UTC).reply
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