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I removed the sentence about him taking taxis on Long Drag because it is absolutely ridiculous. Doing so would be impossible as it is done overland and the only roads in the area 9which are few and far between) are patrolled during Long Drag as candidates are not allowed to even walk on them. Seriously, even if he made that claim in his autobiography it is absolutely fucking ridiculous.
Some suggesions (which I'd make myself, were I surer of the facts):
THanks, -- Finlay McWalter | Talk 23:42, 15 Apr 2004 (UTC)
The article said Fiennes was knighted in 1993, but every cite I've found says he was awarded an OBE then (which despite what [2] says ain't the same thing at all) (so I've been bold and changed it). I can't find any mention of his receiving a knighthood, and this one page [3] (note: that page seems to have white text on a white background - select the invisible text to read it) says it's hereditary. I've never heard of an hereditary knighthood, so I've asked Lord Emsworth if he knows whazzup. -- Finlay McWalter | Talk 03:16, 3 Aug 2004 (UTC)
The Wikipedia page for his grandfather, the 1st Baronet, says he died in Feb 1943. Since Ran was born in March 1944, if you count back his father was still alive in July 1943, so he was the 2nd Baronet for a few months before being killed in the war. Hope this helps. -- Katy4650 ( talk) 04:10, 14 January 2010 (UTC)
I have been checking around and it is pretty certain that he is the 3rd Baronet after all (of Banbury in Oxfordshire, if the truth be told but Baronets don't usually add the place name). So I have been doing a bit of fixing. Dabbler ( talk) 18:00, 29 January 2008 (UTC)
From the article, Baronet: 'A baronet is styled "Sir", but a baronetcy is not considered an order of knighthood.' Sir Ranulph is a baronet; he was not knighted but inherited the right to be addressed as Sir Ranulph. I have altered the article to reflect correct (customary) forms of address. Spathaky ( talk) 21:01, 22 August 2009 (UTC)
The Charles Burton link is to Charles E. Burton, the Irish astronomer (d. 1882). Should there be a disambiguation page and a link to a stub article on the correct Charles Burton? -- MarkBrooks 16:44, 23 September 2005 (UTC)
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The assertion that Sir Ranulph was the first person to visit both poles is not technically correct. That honor belongs to Roald Amundsen (South Pole - 14 December, 1911; North Pole - May, 1926). Fiennes was the first person to visit both poles by land transportation. This claim should be modified in the article. Also, Fiennes trek of 97 days in the Antarctic is not the longest journey in south Polar history, Amundsen's journey was 99 days in duration (19 October, 1911 - 25 January, 1912) and there may well have been others that were longer.
Given that there is no land at the North Pole the sentence "He was the first man to visit both the north and south poles by land" cannot be technically correct. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 87.105.187.197 ( talk) 14:34, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
Isn't The Secret Hunters a novel? The write up here makes Derek Jacobs sound like a real person. -- JBellis 19:35, 15 January 2007 (UTC)
It had to be categorised as fiction because of legal/copyright issues surrounding the original diary. Read it and make up your own mind!
I think the description needs to be removed on several grounds. The description text is largely a copy of the Amazon Product Description and therefore is close to a copyright violation. It doesn't follow NPOV. Also credible sources like the Scott Polar Research Institute have cataloged the work as fiction. And since the only source for the existence of journal is Fiennes himself it is unverifiable. I'll remove the content in a couple of days. Addere 22:05, 27 January 2007 (UTC)
Does anyone know if he did actually blow up the dam in the Doctor Dollitle film set or not? The article suggest he laid the charges but didn't actually detonate them. This [9] seems to suggest he did in fact blow it up, but it mentions it too briefly really. I'm trying to find a reputable source that goes into a bit more detail about it. Norman22b ( talk) 13:29, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
See
[10] for his own account given in an interview. To quote:
"I was asked to create a diversion, which I did, using incendiaries." Still rather brief, but perhaps helpful enough to clarify the article somewhat?
Fyndir (
talk)
12:31, 30 May 2008 (UTC)
He gave another account of this on Top Gear: [11], which seems to suggest that he did blow up the dam. Quote: "...my friend decided to bring this to the general attention by blowing it up, so I laid all the charges, and it was quite successful". Again however, this is quite vague. -- BobLoco ( talk) 13:17, 29 August 2008 (UTC)
In his autobiography, "Mad, Bad and Dangerous to Know", he says that he left off some diversionary flares, but his friend didn't follow through with blowing up the dam. There is also a pictures of newspaper articles about his arrest. -- Katy4650 ( talk) 04:03, 14 January 2010 (UTC)'
He did NOT use his evasion skills to get away, he was busy doing said training when the others were caught from what I understand from watching Top Gear's episode with him.
I'm not sure, but surely his young son is now the heir to his baronetage? Barters ( talk) 23:05, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
I have a vague memory that Fiennes and one other were trapped on an iceberg for some time in 1982; as I recall, they had a radio which worked some of the time and that they'd found out that the UK was at war (the Falkland war was underway) but they couldn't find out who the UK was fighting - after some discussion, they assumed it was France!
This sort of ties in with the Transglobe journey, except there were three of them - if someone can confirm he was trapped on the berg, it might be worth a mention - they apparently both expected not to survive. Apepper ( talk) 21:37, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Yes, it was mentioned in his biography "Mad, Bad and Dangerous to Know" that they spent four months on an iceberg. This was the only way for them to get from near the North pole through the broken ice floes south to meet up with their ship and finish the trip. They started out the journey with a group of three, but one guy left after the Antarctic leg so only two of them were on the iceberg. They were in radio contact with Ran's wife Ginny, who would have told them about the Faulkland war. Apparently one of the newspapers went on about two ex-SAS men avoiding being called up for service by being on an iceberg! -- Katy4650 ( talk) 10:41, 15 January 2010 (UTC)
We can hardly justify a section called "Actor" when he has never done any acting, and the only role he was ever considered for, he was rejected. -- JackofOz ( talk) 22:02, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
The introduction to this article says that he is also known as 'Ran' so shouldn't we redirect this name to this page? I'd do it but I can't make them without authorization and it'd be good to verify the nick name first. Tyciol ( talk) 23:15, 24 October 2009 (UTC)
For no stated or obvious reasons, someone I cannot identify on the history recently tagged this article for autobiography, notability and spam. Fiennes is interesting, well-known and honoured in the UK, so I doubt that the tagger knows what they are doing; if so, perhaps they would kindly give some explanation here, please, to justify these tags? In the meanwhile I have simply removed them. If simple removal and talkpage is not the appropriate Wikiprocedure for this situation, I apologise and would be happy to be pointed at the relevant policies, please! Jezza ( talk) 16:08, 6 April 2010 (UTC)
Would it not be more appropriate to state his nationality as British? Most articles refer to him as either English or British as he came from an English family and grew up there. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.18.159.249 ( talk) 04:56, 7 April 2011 (UTC)
I saw Mr.Fiennes give a lecture at a business event this week, during which he mentioned that he was born in Windsor, England. This contradicts the statement here that he was born in Scotland. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 62.50.199.254 ( talk) 19:53, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
Prior to being RTU'd from SAS, had Fiennes actually been badged? My memory of his autobiography was that he hadn't completed all his training and was later badged with Territiorial SAS. Can anyone confirm/correct me on this? ( 79.190.69.142 ( talk) 19:37, 9 October 2011 (UTC))
(Copied from User talk:200.120.204.192) Martinevans123 ( talk) 20:12, 1 January 2012 (UTC)
Re: your continued revision of the statement in the Ranulph Fiennes article which says:
While I would agree with you that some of the earlier text in this article might have been construed as representing a PoV, edit summaries such as "amateurish, fanzine-style writing" and "re more pov and lame writing" are not particularly helpful or constructive.
I would direct you to re-read this section of the Eiger article here Eiger#The Nordwand, which has, as far as I know, not been challenged as being "PoV":
But I have also looked again at the earlier version of this particular sentence, which read:
If you do not accept that the phrasing already used in Eiger is a perfectly fair and non-PoV statement, then I would recommend reverting to the original version which is clearly a fair and unbiased description of Fiennes' attempt given his well-known fear of heights. Surely anyone would accept that, if someone suffers from agoraphobia, it is obviously going to be a personal challenge to climb any steep mountain, let alone the North face of tbe Eiger, which is recognised by climbers the world over as a very dangerous and daunting task. Thanks. Martinevans123 ( talk) 22:58, 29 December 2011 (UTC)
No mention is made of his army rank, I found an article which says he was the youngest captain in the British Army ( http://www.eliteukforces.info/famous-special-forces/ranulph-fiennes.php) but this doesn't make clear whether this was before or after transfer to Hereford, nor is his SAS rank mentioned. Or his rank in the Omani army. Rank progression is normally mention in military biography. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 217.155.193.120 ( talk) 16:56, 17 September 2012 (UTC)
Under "Adventurer", it states that the team "will be dropped off by ship on the Pacific coast of the continent", but the expedition web site ( http://www.thecoldestjourney.org/home/expedition/map-of-route/) has a route map which shows them crossing from a point to the south of South Africa.
This needs to be verified.
Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.151.113.36 ( talk) 11:26, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
Impatient at the pain the dying fingertips caused, Fiennes cut them off himself with a fretsaw,[3]
I have 2 wee issues with that part.
1st, any body part that is so badly frostbitten that amputation is advised is already necrotized tissue. It's not dying, it's already dead. It was the end 3rd of all 4 fingers & thumbs that were beyond healing. He did have frostbite on the remainder of his fingers that was not severe enough for amputation & therefore was not dead tissue. Amputation was delayed so that the rest of his fingers could heal. (This is what frostbite looks like: http://www.mirror.co.uk/news/uk-news/sir-ranulph-fiennes-pictures-show-1742711 That pic is what Fiennes got in Antarctica; he may face 2 more amputations.) It was not the tips that he cut off that caused him pain. In speaking of his experience, Fiennes said that when he was engaged in self-amputation, if it began bleeding or causing him pain, he moved the blade up a bit further into the *dead zone*. So the bits he cut off weren't painful & the bits he didn't weren't dying, but healing.
2nd, that 3rd citation doesn't say what's in this article. The sole reference it makes is *When he is not planning expeditions, scaling mountains or running races, Sir Ranulph can be found cutting the ends off his frostbitten fingers with the help of a vice and a fret saw, *. That hardly translates to *impatient* etc. It's also sort of an advertising gimmick page, basically; the watches it sells are supposed to be tough enough for extreme expeditions. The 4th citation (the Guardian page) at least explains the self-amputation somewhat better.
I was told never to delete someone else's footnote, so I'm merely suggesting that #4 is better than #3 for referencing Fiennes's self-amputation, & that the above-quoted bit isn't mentioned in the source to which it links.
Also, the citation for the Royal British Legion Magazine goes to its home page, not an article on Fiennes - should it not go directly to whatever material they have on him, & if that's not possible due to their site coding, should not some other source be utlized? ScarletRibbons ( talk) 06:53, 5 May 2013 (UTC)
Do we really need a list of other British explorers? Surely the Category at the bottom of the page provides access to that? Martinevans123 ( talk) 19:21, 16 November 2015 (UTC)
First,
"According to the Guinness Book of World Records in 1984, he was the world's greatest living explorer".
This needs more clarification - it is Guinness' avowed policy to investigate and publish measurable records. How could they measure the "greatness" (meaning fame)? What does the book actually say about his achievements?
Second, this page states he "is a distant cousin of the British Royal Family". It would be more believable if the relationship was demonstrated - through whom is he connected? Cloptonson ( talk) 16:24, 27 January 2016 (UTC)
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This week I had the great pleasure of attending a talk given by Sir Ranulph, but I was much saddened when he revealed at the outset that he was suffering from Parkinson's, and thought it necessary to apologise for not being able to hold his laser pointer steadily as a result. It's a terrible affliction for mere mortals such as ourselves, but for someone like Sir Ranulph it's an absolute tragedy - my heart goes out! Does anyone have a reliable source to cite to add this sad news to the article? Red Sunset 13:10, 24 October 2021 (UTC)