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Reviewer: Sovereign Sentinel ( talk · contribs) 08:55, 13 August 2015 (UTC)
I will review this. sovereign° sentinel (contribs) 08:55, 13 August 2015 (UTC)
I am placing this article on hold. sovereign° sentinel (contribs) 10:30, 13 August 2015 (UTC)
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1. Well-written: | ||
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | This article is literally rewritten from scratch to comply with GA criteria. No problems here | |
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | One thing I want to note is that more wikilinks to more basic technical topics can be added, per WP:UNDERLINK, However, this is not a GA requirement. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | Citation style is somewhat inconsistent, with inconsistent styling for names of single publications. However, this is not a GA requirement. This needs to be corrected if the article is to pass FA | |
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | All citations are from third-party reliable publications. | |
2c. it contains no original research. | Everything is cited, what else can I say? | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | ||
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | Previously the article contained detailed information about the processors themselves. This has now been split to a new list page. | |
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | The tone of the article is very positive, but this is the consensus of third-party reliable sources. | |
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | The only unstable section of the article was "Specifications", which has now been removed. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | A non-free use rationale has been provided for the only image. | |
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | The logo image is used for identification of the article. | |
7. Overall assessment. | This article meets the GA criteria. |