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Hi Darkquest21. The Proactiv article is up for review for "Good Article" status and I noticed you made some edits here (thank you for correcting my spelling) that wasn't all sourced and may have been added with too much detail regarding Proactiv+. I am a PR rep for the company, so when I noticed it had at least some critical information, regarding price and whatnot, I realized it would be inappropriate for me to edit it in article-space. Do you mind if I take a shot at a more concise version on Talk for consideration? My thinking is we might be able to break this down to a couple compact sentences in the Products section. CorporateM ( Talk) 12:39, 4 September 2013 (UTC)
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Currently the article has a dedicated section for Proactiv+, however the only sources used are a press release and a blurb. I did a Google News search, but didn't find any other available sources. Additionally, some of it is either promotional or doesn't make sense, like saying that Proactiv+ has a "significantly higher price" at $30, compared to $30.
I would suggest just a single sentence in the Products section like "A Proactiv+ version is sold that does not contain parabens." [1] It could be expanded later on if more sources emerge, but at-the-moment I have only found this one blurb, which may even suggest it is not worth including at all. Thoughts? CorporateM ( Talk) 19:45, 13 September 2013 (UTC)
Thanks @ Anthonyhcole for clearing out the unsourced stuff. There is also some repetition, which I would be happy to clean up unless there is an objection:
Figure we should focus on the areas + differs from regular. CorporateM ( Talk) 12:11, 14 September 2013 (UTC)
Someone brought to my attention that my COI was not well-disclosed on this article and I noticed the archived Talk page strings where the initial article was discussed and implemented has been archived, but doesn't show up in the archive box at the top. Obviously editors would be interested in seeing the entire history of my participation and the original discussions. I will find out why the archives are not displaying. CorporateM ( Talk) 14:13, 16 October 2013 (UTC)