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"and six different minigames" - perhaps link
minigame
Done
"The game saw generally positive reviews, who liked its accessibility for child players" - no pronoun agreement here. Try something like The game saw generally positive reviews; critics lauded its accessibility for child players...
Oops, you're right. I've borrowed your wording.
"The game was originally released by Nippon Columbia in Japan on December 5, 2019, and later by Aksys Games internationally on December 3, 2020." - I would usually put the release dates at the beginning of the lead but since this is a short article I can see why it's here
Mhm.
The lead summarises the article per
WP:LEAD, accounting for its shortness
Gameplay
"based on tablets indicating in what manner a room should be furnished" - is this referring to
tablet computer or something like a
clay tablet?
Linked clay tablets - this is a fairy-tale fantasy setting with no advanced technology
Reception
Famitsu should be linked in the first instance it appears
You're right - this is the type of thing that I easily overlook while reorganizing paragraphs
" and the fluffy dresses and accessories like a dream for young players" - I have a feeling "like a dream" should be in quotations
Agreed, and done.
I understand this article may be as comprehensive as it can be, owing to its small Japanese release. The sources also check out. I'll leave this On hold until the above are clarified. Good work on this one. ♦
jaguar22:17, 20 December 2020 (UTC)reply
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Jaguar: I believe I have addressed everything. And yep - I didn't even intend to bring this to GA (I'm not really the target audience for this kind of game, hah...), I just improved it while looking for sources during its recent AfD, and then realized that it was already covering everything. Btw, if you have any GANs/FACs/FLCs/PRs/etc that you're waiting for reviews on, I'll do one in return (alternatively I'll owe you one for when you do).--
AlexandraIDV22:43, 20 December 2020 (UTC)reply