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A fact from Potteries derby appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the Did you know column on 8 April 2024 (
check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
Did you know... that one Potteries derby game was decided by a goal scored twelve seconds into the match?
There is already a Stoke City season-by-season graph, if a Port Vale graph is created I would think it would be good to combine them and put them on this article to show the teams positions relative to each other.--
EchetusXe (
talk)
14:04, 13 January 2009 (UTC)reply
"Dave Brammer also turned out for Crewe Alexandra after being controversially sold to Crewe", 1,
WP:OLINK for Crewe already being linked earlier. And 2, why was it controversial?
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... that a patch of mud was a deciding factor in one Potteries derby football match? Source: Bullock, Liam (2023). El Ceramico: The Story of the Potteries Derby. Pitch. p. 78.
ISBN978-1-80150-393-8.
ALT1: ... that one Potteries derby game was decided by a goal scored in the opening 12 seconds of the match? Source: Bullock, Liam (2023). El Ceramico: The Story of the Potteries Derby. Pitch. p. 115.
ISBN978-1-80150-393-8.
Other problems: - Some of the wording sounds far too much like what a stereotypical sportswriter would write, rather than written in an encyclopedic tone. Examples include "derby saga", "did Vale no favours", "Stoke boss Guðjón Þórðarson had his eyes on promotion", etc.
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Overall: AGF on offline sources; ALT1 is the easier one to cite (presumably), but needs its citation moved to the same sentence to comply with DYK guidelines. SounderBruce07:09, 3 March 2024 (UTC)reply
Looks like this was removed from the DYK guidelines somewhat recently. Normally hooks in the prose had to have a citation placed as closely as possible to make it easier to verify. I can approve this once some copyediting is done. SounderBruce02:11, 4 March 2024 (UTC)reply
The last sentence of the "Keeping apart" section needs major rewriting, and some more problematic phrases remain, such as "scrappy piece of play" and "facing a ducking in the River Trent". The tone is just not befitting of the wider project. SounderBruce04:34, 5 March 2024 (UTC)reply
I've removed that last sentence as the incident didn't have any lasting significance. I've reworded "facing a ducking". I have kept "scrappy piece of play" in. It seems there is a slight difference in the definition of the word scrappy in
American English and
British English, but the article is written in British English so the word scrappy is perfectly suitable to the tone of the project.
EchetusXe10:14, 5 March 2024 (UTC)reply
Sorry, didn't see the update in my watchlist. I guess "scrappy" should be fine in this context, and the article's casual language has been toned down. Approved. SounderBruce04:03, 15 March 2024 (UTC)reply