Personal opinion, not compulsory, but I personally think that the topic sentence for the gameplay section should be something like "Pillars of Eternity is a role-playing game that ..."
was released for Microsoft Windows, OS X, and Linux in March 2015. - This information is related to the release section instead of the development section.
The development section is well-written. But is there any more information about how the story, gameplay, music are inspired or created? It is not compulsory, but the development will be better with these information
I added more information about the music and its inspiration, but unfortunately I couldn't find more info about the story and the gameplay. --
Markhoris (
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13:41, 15 May 2015 (UTC)reply
Baldur's Gate expansion pack, Tales of the Sword Coast (1999) - Don't need to cite the year
a worthy successor to the games it was inspired by, such as Planescape: Torment and the Baldur's Gate and Icewind Dale series. - You have mentioned the name of these games before. You don't need to mention them again.
I am not sure whether sources from Segment Next, GameBanshee, Ripten and Heise online are reliable or not
Removed Segment Next, Ripten and Heise online and removed the first usage of the GameBanshee. The second time it's used is to cite an interview directly from the website, which adds a large piece of info to the article, so I haven't removed it for now.
Do I need to ask an administrator or patroller to add it, or can I add it myself? I'm not sure how to do this since I believe it's the second image I've uploaded, and I can't find anything about it in the rules. --
Markhoris (
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13:41, 15 May 2015 (UTC)reply
You can add it yourself. You can replace the licensing section of the image with {{Non-free game screenshot|Windows|Mac|Linux|image has rationale=yes}}.
AdrianGamer (
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13:56, 15 May 2015 (UTC)reply
Great game, great article. You have done a great job in expanding the article. I remember how short it was back in February. However, the sources, and the image have some problems. After you have addressed all the issues I pointed out, the article will passed. Good Luck. AdrianGamer (
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10:24, 15 May 2015 (UTC)reply