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Hi, I am Rowena from 360 Integrated PR. I have been hired by Philip Glassborow to update and flesh out his wikipedia page, as it was out of date, lacking citations and didn't include any images. I have created a draft which is located is
here. I have done my best to remain neutral and provide additional factual, non-advertorial additional content with appropriate citations. I have also reorganised existing content into appropriate categories to improve the look of the page.
In line with Wikipedia's conflict of interest policy, I would like to request that someone looks at this draft with the view that it could replace the current entry. I am very open to suggestions, edits and recommendations, so please do let me know if you would like me to make these. I would also appreciate guidance on the next steps after the draft has been reviewed (as I know typically Wikipedia would prefer COI editors not to make edits themselves). Thanks in advance for your help! -
Rowena360 (
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15:58, 10 November 2016 (UTC)reply
Most of the sources you have used in your draft are passing mentions or listings which confirm that he wrote things but do not support notability for which we require indepth coverage of the subject.
Theroadislong (
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11:29, 2 December 2016 (UTC)reply
Hi
Theroadislong, thanks so much for your feedback. The documentation was also very useful. I have replaced the references you have referred to below in my draft. (In the case of the two music folios, I removed reference to these in the text as this could not be substantiated). Does this look any better?
Rowena360 (
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20:15, 5 December 2016 (UTC)reply
Still a large number of passing mentions, blogs or listings with no in depth coverage of Glassborow. When writing for Wikipedia you need to collect up the in depth reliable sources in magazines and newspapers and then and summarise them in your own words, we don't start with a list of facts and details and then try to find sources for them. If there are no in depth sources then Wikipedia is not interested.
Theroadislong (
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20:37, 5 December 2016 (UTC)reply
Thanks for your feedback again,
Theroadislong. I am new to Wikipedia so I'm still learning and I appreciate the help. Would it be possible to get some more in depth guidance on what parts of the draft are good and which are bad/need substantiation? This will help me review the draft and hopefully produce something more watertight. Alternatively, is there anywhere I can go to get more help on honing the article? — Preceding
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Rowena360 (
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20:50, 7 December 2016 (UTC)reply
Hi
Theroadislong, I have created a new heavily-revised version of the draft, taking out all unsubstantiated items (with the exception of the line about Jackanory Playhouse and the Vivian Ellis Prize, as Philip is mentioned on both relevant Wikipedia pages). I hope this is an improvement over the last draft and the current Wikipedia page. Is this draft any better? Happy to adjust if needed if this one is on the right lines.
Rowena360 (
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10:27, 9 December 2016 (UTC)reply
You need sources that treat the topic in depth only one of these does so far. Rather than propose a whole new draft you would be better advised to suggest the addition of single sentences with suitable references.
Theroadislong (
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11:59, 9 December 2016 (UTC)reply
Hi
Theroadislong, thanks for your comments and for your additions/modifications to the current entry. I have appreciated your help and support and I will pass your comments back to Philip.
Rowena360 (
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12:48, 13 December 2016 (UTC)reply
Theroadislong, I was just wondering about images. I know two I added have been deleted, but posters of 'Great Big Radio Show' and 'Welcome to Terezin' are available in Wikicommons. Would these be good additions to this page?
Rowena360 (
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10:06, 22 December 2016 (UTC)reply
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Rowena360: In my opinion, the Great Big Radio Show will do, however, considering that the information to represent Welcome to Terezin was declined, and seeing as it is only talked about in a sentence or so, it would be better to leave the second picture out. Regards,
VB00 (
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20:45, 5 January 2017 (UTC)reply