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Reviewer: Dwaipayanc ( talk · contribs) 15:39, 25 January 2013 (UTC)
Doing...-- Dwaipayan ( talk) 15:39, 25 January 2013 (UTC)
- Comment.
- "The generals are kidnapped, and in several cases killed, in front of their families, while later the captured generals are tortured while the communists dance around a bonfire." This sentence does not sound well-structured, with two "while"s.
- Reworked slightly. — Crisco 1492 ( talk) 23:56, 25 January 2013 (UTC)
- Nice.-- Dwaipayan ( talk) 15:32, 26 January 2013 (UTC)
- "Director Monty Tiwa likewise praised the film's shorts..." Is that the word (shorts) that you intended? I do not have the technical knowledge to understand if "shorts" mean something in filming parlance.-- Dwaipayan ( talk) 16:15, 25 January 2013 (UTC)
- Typo, thanks for picking that up. — Crisco 1492 ( talk) 23:56, 25 January 2013 (UTC)
- Do you think a separate "Cast" section would be appropriate? that usually helps in easy navigation.-- Dwaipayan ( talk) 16:31, 25 January 2013 (UTC)
- Not entirely necessary, per WP:FILMCAST point 3. — Crisco 1492 ( talk) 23:56, 25 January 2013 (UTC)
- Yes, I agree that cast section is not mandatory. I was merely asking if you would consider such a section, since that often help in easy navigating for the readers. They can refer back to cast section if needed, when encountering a particular actor/character's name in some other section. However, this is not necessary, and of course not a ga requirement.-- Dwaipayan ( talk) 15:32, 26 January 2013 (UTC)
- If I'm able to get ahold of a copy where the credits are actually legible (the one I have is in p***-poor shape) I can consider that. Haven't found anything more in RSes than what's in the article already. — Crisco 1492 ( talk) 15:56, 26 January 2013 (UTC)
- Alternative text for the images definitely need improvement, please see WP:ALT. However, this may not be a GA requirement.-- Dwaipayan ( talk) 16:36, 25 January 2013 (UTC)
- It's currently not even an FA requirement. What do you think needs improvement? I have changed the alt text for the pictures and made them more or less like the example at WP:ALTTEXT (neither is used to describe the person in question, so describing them is not necessary) — Crisco 1492 ( talk)
- Yes, now the alt texts read appropriate.-- Dwaipayan ( talk) 15:32, 26 January 2013 (UTC)
I will resume the ga review soon. Regards.-- Dwaipayan ( talk) 15:32, 26 January 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review thus far! — Crisco 1492 ( talk) 15:56, 26 January 2013 (UTC)
- The article meets ll the GA criteria, so I am passing it.-- Dwaipayan ( talk) 21:53, 27 January 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. — Crisco 1492 ( talk) 23:10, 27 January 2013 (UTC)