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Hi, I am reviewing this article for GA. It is an interesting, well written article. My concerns are the following:
"but can be distinguished by the white of its belly not extending over the bases of its pectoral fins." - I don't like this wording as it is clumsy but I could not think of a variant. Perhaps you can.
Changed to "...by the dark, rather than white, color over the bases of its pectoral fins"
I removed some wikilinks that went to disambig pages, eg.
lifespan. Linking to a disambig page is rarely justified.
OK
I am a little concerned about all the fish terms (
WP:JARGON). For the most part you have done a good job of explaining, but any more you can do would be great.
Not sure what can be done; changed "labial furrows" to just "furrows", since that's what they are.