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Are the Japanese romaji lyrics really nessecary at all? Bakahito 14:13, 8 May 2006 (UTC)
On listening to the song it sounds to me that the first reversed set of lyrics in the Bridge are "I need true emotion." This reading of the lyrics seems to be more inline with the overall theme of the song. Should the refrence be changed? 69.241.226.245 05:21, 19 July 2006 (UTC)
Should it mention that Sanctuary has lyrics when it's sung backwards? [1]-- Sango4ever ( talk) 23:29, 4 January 2008 (UTC)
British Rapper Devlin sampled this in his song London City. Should this be mentioned? 82.47.53.220 ( talk) 14:25, 21 November 2010 (UTC)
I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Passion (Hikaru Utada song)'s orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.
The entire part about Rush Hour and Exodus has nothing to do with the song. This belongs on the page for Utada or Exodus. - Anon
Reference named "IGN-KH-Utada":
I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT ⚡ 01:47, 4 December 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: ProtoDrake ( talk · contribs) 18:51, 26 April 2015 (UTC)
I'll take this on, as it's the oldest review currently up, and we need to keep the line moving. --
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@ CaliforniaDreamsFan:, I've had an initial look through the article and there are some things that stand out.
That's all for now. I'll have another look through when these issues have been addressed. -- ProtoDrake ( talk) 13:08, 27 April 2015 (UTC)
@ ProtoDrake: - Done both. Finished archiving references, updating references, adding citations and re-formatting dates. Some links and references had to be removed and/or replaced as they were unable access, etc. (Changes can be found here)
I am a huge fan of this song (and the artist), and I was the Wikipedian that nominated it (which eventually received a GA approval), and potentially want to gain this article prospects as a Featured Artice. However, over time, I have noticed that there were a lot of elements and mistakes that were not identified in the review that was originally conducted to get it to GA standard; for example, there were prose/grammar issues, inconsistent value of citation templates, overuse of words, awkward tenses and placements of sub-articles and the inappropriate/discouraging use of blogs and other below A-class websites (little to my knowledge at the time). As a result, I am putting this up for re-assessment to see if this is of any right to make it inside the GA community. I have tided up the article severely to a good and appropriate standard, but need more advice in order to improve it and keep it at GA level, and I'll give it my all and determination to take your guys comments and criticisms in order to get this to a higher standard in any way possible. Any criticism or comments are welcomed. Best regards, CaliforniaDreamsFan ( talk · contribs} 05:22, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
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Is this appropriate to remove the opening paragraph in the Background and conception section particularly the stuff about Tarzan because what does that have to do with the creation of the song? Plus the source is from kh2.co.uk which is presumbly a fan-site???:
In early 2003, The Walt Disney Company and Square Enix confirmed the sequel to Kingdom Hearts (2002). That July, the creator of Kingdom Hearts, Tetsuya Nomura, aimed to have the game in stores by 2004, but several legal issues regarding the approval of characters and aesthetics from the Disney franchise obscured this, such as the Tarzan world being denied due to a change in ownership. NakhlaMan ( talk) 10:33, 14 July 2023 (UTC)