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Reviewer: Sjones23 ( talk · contribs) 04:28, 16 November 2020 (UTC) reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   While the lead looks good, it should be at least three to four paragraphs since the page has 49,610 characters as per WP:LEADLENGTH.

• •  Done. Split into four paragraphs, and organized better.

1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a ( reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c ( OR): d ( copyvio and plagiarism):

   While all dead citations should be archived, we should also add archives for live ones as well. When I ran Earwig's copyvio machine, there was at least 73.3%% confidence that it could be a copyvio from this source, but I could be wrong.

2. It is broad in its coverage.

   a ( major aspects): b ( focused):

   No problems here.

3. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

   I don't see any neutrality problems here.

4. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

   No edit wars or content disputes.

5. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b ( appropriate use with suitable captions):

   The images look good to me.

6. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   I'm placing this review on hold for now. Lord Sjones23 ( talk - contributions) 04:48, 16 November 2020 (UTC) reply

• Sjones23: I checked the sources at hand that are causing the most suspicion in terms of plagiarism and it turns out that besides trigger words such as Paper Mario: The Origami King, most of the phrases flagged up in the comparisons are referenced in the article as quotes by the game's director. Hopefully, I did something useful. Captain Galaxy 10:52, 16 November 2020 (UTC) reply
  • • Sjones23:True, these quotes are pretty bulky, but cutting out portions of them would make them confusing to understand, so they were kept in their entirety. Le Panini ^Talk 10:56, 16 November 2020 (UTC) reply
      • And now it's time for our third Paper Mario article. Nice work. Lord Sjones23 ( talk - contributions) 01:40, 18 November 2020 (UTC) reply