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"It has been found in deposits from the Cambrian age (Atdabanian epoch) of Sweden and Poland," an
age in geology is very different from a
period, and later you say which species was found in Sweden and Poland, so you don't have to say here, "Sweden and Poland"User:Dunkleosteus77 |
push to talk01:26, 20 September 2018 (UTC)reply
Did you make the size comparisons with Arthropleura and Jaekelopterus because they were all contemporaneous? You should probably say, "Many contemporaneous other arthropods reached much greater lengths," or, "Many other arthropods of the time reached much greater lengths"User:Dunkleosteus77 |
push to talk01:26, 20 September 2018 (UTC)reply
No, they lived in different periods. Should I add that Arthropleura and Jaekelopterus were not contemporaneous with it or mention other Cambrian arthropods?
Instead of saying, "Paleomerus is the most diverse strabopid genus, with two species described, one more than the rest of the strabopids," you could say, "Paleomerus has two species described, more than the rest of the strabopids," or something a little more conciseUser:Dunkleosteus77 |
push to talk02:10, 21 September 2018 (UTC)reply