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15:13, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
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Looks good on first glance. Looking forward to reviewing this.
ΤheQ Editor
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15:13, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
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- Thanks! I have been too busy to work on new articles lately, but I will have plenty of time to polish this one up.
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21:10, 12 October 2014 (UTC)
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Sanfranciscogiants17: Apparently, the link to
Kung Fu Panda was already removed when I was reviewing it, so you didn't need to add it. I removed it again, unless there were reasons why he was nicknamed Kung Fu Panda. Thanks,
ΤheQ Editor
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13:46, 18 October 2014 (UTC)
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IMPORTANT - Please refer to this
permanent link when talking about references.
- Lead barely has any info on Early Life and Personal Life.
- no need to link to Kung Fu Panda
- The caption for the infobox picture needs a period.
- "but he did not show up for two weeks" sounds like the scout came after two weeks. how about dropping the "for two weeks"?
- the caption for the picture needs a period.
- the third paragraph of 2009 is too short per GA requirements, perhaps merging it into another paragraph.
- in May Sandoval - punctuation
- months after - specify
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File:Pablo Sandoval, 2012 World Series parade.jpg needs a period