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Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the
Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
earwig copvio check is 0% (but then all sources are in japanese)
pic has an adequate free use rationale and is relevant
sources appear reliable and article is neutral and stable, no original research
Comments on prose
"Premise" could be titled synopsis or plot, then split out from that the themes into its own section. then the references could be in themes - what do you think? I can see you have several GAs in this area already
Chapter 1–14 = Chapters 1-14
"Nico Nico News described him as attractive and full of what makes otokonoko characters charming, with the contrast between his gender and his appearance,[10] and NLab appreciated how characters respect Yuki's gender and treat him as a man regardless of his femininity and how he is the wife.[3]" - too many "and"s, suggest breaking sentence up
What is NLab for those who don't know? A magazine, a website?
Shogakukan is a company so "its" not "their"
" volumes in 2017–2020" suggest "volumes between 2017 and 2020."
Overall
Overall this article seems pretty good but lacking some structure per
Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Anime_and_manga and as opposed to other manga good articles such as
Classmates (manga),
Samurai Champloo and
Cobra (manga). For example, these all have a section on characters which would be very useful here since the volume synopses are otherwise quite confusing for me eg i wondered who is Kido on first mention. Perhaps a theme section would be helpful as mentioned above.
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Mujinga: Hi and thanks for the review. I've been sick and simultaneously very busy with work and haven't been on Wikipedia, but I wanted to apologize for not giving you any response. I'll try to get to this in the next few days.--
AlexandraIDV18:51, 5 April 2022 (UTC)reply
Oh feel better! Thanks for the reply, if we are communicating every few days then I have no problem with the review taking a bit longer than usual. Especially when my comments were pretty short to begin with.
Mujinga (
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07:43, 6 April 2022 (UTC)reply
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Alexandra IDV: no updates in two weeks makes me wonder if it's advisable to close the review and then you can renominate when time suits? I can give it a few days and if I don't hear back, I'll do that. Hope all is well, obviously real life concerns come first!
Mujinga (
talk)
17:27, 19 April 2022 (UTC)reply
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