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23:00, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
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Will do tonight.
Noah
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23:00, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
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- "His reign is relatively obscure, his throne may have been usurped" I don't think a comma is the appropriate punctuation here.
- Replaced it with a dot instead. --
HistoryofIran (
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02:24, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
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- "Shayegan deduces that Gotarzes I reigned till his death in c. 80 BC, and was succeeded by Orodes I." Deduced
- Done. --
HistoryofIran (
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02:24, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
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- "Babylonian chronicles also makes mention" Should be made
- Done. --
HistoryofIran (
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02:24, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
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- "It is uncertain if it remained the same case under the Parthians" Could this be rephrased? Also, cut "the" from the next part of the sentence.
- Done. --
HistoryofIran (
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19:44, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
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- "While Orodes I's grandfather Mithridates II used" separate the name with commas
- Done. --
HistoryofIran (
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19:44, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
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- "notably followed wrote cuneiform records" ???
- Oops, fixed. --
HistoryofIran (
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02:24, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
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- "continued ruling the kingdom now as a Parthian vassal." comma after kingdom
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HistoryofIran (
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02:24, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
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That should be it for this article.
Noah
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02:08, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
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- Are there any details about Orodes I that could be added to the article to expand it and the lead a bit?
Noah
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00:23, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
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- No unfortunately, I milked every source regarding him as much as possible.
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