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The opening paragraph mentions Archaeopteryx multiple times and yes, that was the oldest fossil found but the major features that make flight possible are also important an could be summed up somewhat in the first paragraph Moodley.10 ( talk) 22:45, 30 September 2014 (UTC)
I removed this section because it was obviously original research. -- Dylanrush ( talk) 04:24, 22 October 2008 (UTC)
Although the evidence in favor of this model is scientifically plausible, the evidence against it is substantial. For instance, a cursorial flight model would be less energetically favorable when compared to the alternative hypotheses. In order to achieve liftoff, Archaeopteryx would have to run faster than modern birds by a factor of three due to its weight. Furthermore, as the mass of Archaeopteryx versus the distance needed for minimum velocity to obtain liftoff speed is proportional. Therefore, as mass increases, the energy required for takeoff increases exponentially. Other research has shown that the physics involved in cursorial flight would not make this a likely answer to the origin of avian flight. Once flight speed is obtained and Archaeopteryx is in the air, drag would cause the velocity to instantaneously decrease. In addition, balance could not be maintained due to this immediate reduction in velocity. Hence, Archaeopteryx would have a very short and ineffective flight. In contrast to Ostrom’s theory regarding flight as a hunting mechanism, physics again disproves the credibility of this model. In order to effectively trap insects with the wings, Archaeopteryx would require a mechanism such as holes in the wings to reduce air resistance. Without this mechanism, the cost/benefit ratio would not be feasible.
Much of this article is in need of attention from someone, or some group of people, who know what they are talking about and can explain it clearly and accurately. This paragraph is so poorly written as to tell the reader nothing of value. I cannot copyedit it because I cannot understand it well enough. I'm not an expert, rather I wanted to find out about the subject, and this article has not helped much. It is also largelky unsourced.
I appeal to those who know to tell us about it properly-- CIngram99 ( talk) 12:41, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
My concern is that I can't find anything anywhere very specific about how feathers aid in flight, only the remark that they do and the remark that they would not for larger animals that may also in the past have had them (as well as the flightless birds we have today, where this is so obviously true). Julzes ( talk) 18:00, 26 May 2009 (UTC)
Ís there really anything here which wouldn't be better off at Origin of birds? FunkMonk ( talk) 00:31, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
I agree that there are many similarities with the "Origin of Birds" this page should be more about how flight became possible? Keep it focused on the theories and biology verses actual phylogenetics Moodley.10 ( talk) 22:52, 30 September 2014 (UTC)
Shouldn't avian defecation system also be mentioned in weight reduction as it reduces the amount of water needed in digestive system.
Linkato1 ( talk) 13:43, 20 October 2012 (UTC)
Modern birds evolved from a specific type of theropods, maniraptor. The article could go on to mention traits found in these maniraptors that are common features in todays birds i.e. feathers Moodley.10 ( talk) 22:06, 30 September 2014 (UTC)moodley.10
-- Espoo ( talk) 19:27, 5 May 2013 (UTC)
Why Proavis redirects to Origin of birds (where the term Proavis is not even mentioned) instead of here (where the Proavis term is mentioned?).
See also those two images (by Hungarian Franz Nopcsa, 1907, London):
This Proavis from 1907 is, I guess, purely hypothetical, but it should be mentioned and illustrated on this article. Nobody agrees? Kintaro ( talk) 20:33, 7 October 2013 (UTC)
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